题目内容
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. Proper relaxation is as important as work.
注意:1.无须写标题;
2.除诗歌外,文体不限;
3. 内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例;
4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。
One possible version:
Spending enough time attending classes, reading books and finishing various homework are really good things. However, I don’t mean a good student should spend every hour and every minute studying. Intensive work without any rest and relaxation is sure to make us tired and reduce our efficiency in study.
I still remember the wonderful football team I was on one year ago. Our teammates met there happily every afternoon and enjoyed ourselves. I made many good friends and we talked and laughed daily. After a day’s hard work, how nice it felt to relax ourselves! With a happy mood and a clear head, I in turn made progress in my study, which made me firmly believe the benefits of relaxation.
Proper rest will do good to our studies. We should strike a proper balance between work and rest.
【解析】这是一篇材料分析类写作。题目给出了主题,即劳逸结合,写作时要注意适当增加内容,以保证文章的连贯性和真实性。第一句采用了3个介宾短语做并列主语;然后用However做转折,说明休息娱乐的重要性。第三句is sure to表示保证,连接整句。第二段引用具体的事例进行说明,经常用I still remember···来引起之前发生过的事,与前文连接流畅。运用感叹句how nice it felt to relax ourselves!表达自己的心情,和with引导的状语从句及which引导的定语从句With a happy mood and a clear head, I in turn made progress in my study, which made me firmly believe the benefits of relaxation.进一步证明休息放松对学习工作的好处。最后一段下结论,用Proper rest will do good to our studies. We should strike a proper balance between work and rest.两句话简明扼要的概括了建议。总结:写作时对于一些常用的动词,要注意其其他形式以更为简练的表达自己的观点;要注意文章结构完整和层次的划分;对于引用事例说明的文章要简明清晰的描述事例,并注重事例的可信性。
考点:考查材料分析类写作