题目内容
10.A passenger told an air hostess that he needed a cup of water to take his medicine when the plane just took off.She told him that she would bring him the water within ten minutes.Thirty minutes passed.But the air hostess was so busy in the aircraft cabin(客舱) that she forgot to bring him the water!As a result,the passenger couldn't take his medicine.When the air hostess hurried to him with a cup of water,he was angry and refused her offer.
In the following hours on the flight,each time the air hostess passed by the passenger she would ask him with a smile whether he needed help or not.But the passenger never paid attention to her.
When the passenger was going to get off the plane,he said to the air hostess with a smile,"On the flight,you offer service to me for twelve times in a11.Although l didn't accept them,how can I refuse your twelve sincere(真诚的)smiles?"
[写作内容】
1.概括短文的内容要点,该部分的词数大约30左右;
2.以"真诚的回报"为主题发表自己的看法,至少包含以下的内容要点,该部分的词数大约
120左右:
(1)如果你是那位旅客,你是否也会被这位空姐的做法感动?为什么?
(2)你是否也有遇到过类似的情况,描述一下当时的情形;
(3)你觉得真诚能够使我们得到回报吗?
[写作要求】
你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子.
分析 高分句型:
句型一:
Although the air hostess made a mistake because of her busy work,she tried to make up and offered the service sincerely.
尽管空姐因为工作繁忙犯了个错误,但她还是尽力弥补,真诚地提供服务.
句型二:
Therefore,①if I were the passenger,I would be moved by the air hostess as well.
因此,如果我是那位乘客,我也会被空姐所感动的.
①此处在if 引导的条件句中使用了虚拟语气句,表明了自己的态度,从而使得表达更具逻辑性.
解答 A passenger on a flight become very angry because the air hostess forgot to bring him a cup of water.But finally he was moved by her sincere smiles and service.(概述短文要点)
Although the air hostess made a mistake because of her busy work,she tried to make up and offered the service sincerely.【高分句型一】Therefore,if I were the passenger,I would be moved by the air hostess as well.【高分句型二】(表明了自己对这件事情的看法)
I used to meet a waiter like the air hostess.Because of his carelessness,he spilled the soup on a customer.Of course the customer became angry.The waiter realized his fault,apologized to the customer sincerely and finally got the customer's pardon.(讲述自己的一次经历)
As to me,I believe that we can get pardon or even repay if we treat others sincerely.When others feel that we are sincere enough,they are more willing to forgive or help us.(阐明自己的观点)
点评 概括短文的要点时,应在明确文章主题的前提下,围绕着六个要素(when,where,who,what,why,how)展开;在陈述观点或发表看法时,应直接提出自己的观点和立场,常用的句型有Personally,I think that …;In my opinion,I'd say that…等;另外,为了使文章能有较强的逻辑性,还应在句子结构或句式上下功夫.