Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺漏词的地方加一个漏字符号，并在其下写出该词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1). 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2). 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Mandy,
I'm not doing well in my lessons at school, especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university. He thinks I'm lazy, but it's not true. I work really hard, often study late into the night! I've tried to talk to my mother, but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does. My brother doesn't study very hard, and he always gets excellent grades. It's not fair! The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year. When I told my dad，all he said was, “You mustn't waste your time in art. You must focus your mind on your lessons!” I'm feeling quite puzzling as to what to do now. Would you please help me out?
Thanks a lot!
Yours,
Lisa

Answer 1

【答案】①especial→ especially ； ②me后加to ； ③study→ studying； ④said→ says； ⑤like→ as； ⑥and→ but ； ⑦删除it ； ⑧year→ years； ⑨in→ on/over ； ⑩puzzling→ puzzled
【解析】本文是一篇求助信，作者就自己学习上与父母的分歧，希望得到帮助。
①考查副词。此处应由副词修饰介词短语in maths。故especial改为especially。
②考查非谓语动词 want后跟不定式作宾补。故go前加to。
③考查非谓语动词。studying作work hard的伴随状语。故将study改为studying。
④ 考查时态。根据前后语境应用一般现在时，故said改为says。
⑤ 考查状语从句。like前有as，as...as...连接比较状语从句，故like改为as。
⑥ 考查连词。前后分句是转折关系，应将and改为but。
⑦考查定语从句。I like是thing的定语从句，引导词that作like的宾语已经省略，不能再出现it作宾语，故去掉it。
⑧考查名词。for years”好多年“，因此year改为 years 。
⑨ 考查介词。waste time on/over sth.固定短语，”在某事上浪费时间“。因此in改为 on/over。
⑩考查形容词。主语是I，应用puzzled作表语，表示“感到迷惑的”，因此puzzling改为 puzzled 。