Question

【题目】书面表达

假设你是John，你的笔友李刚英语口语不好，他来心情你谈谈你的意见，你给他写一封回信。提出以下看法和建议。

1. 熟能生巧。

课上，争取机会积极发言，老师会帮助你纠正错误。课下多练习，与喜欢讲英语的同学共同实践，互帮互助。

2. 不要失去信心，不要怕讲错，不要怕别人讥笑

3. 只要坚持，一定能提高英语口语水平

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Thank you for your letter. I'm sorry to know that you have some trouble with your spoken English.

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Yours sincerely,

John

Answer 1

【答案】

Thank you for your letter. I'm sorry to know that you have some trouble with your spoken English. Here is some of my advice on improving spoken English:

First of all, in class you must be active. Get every chance to speak. If you make any mistake, your teacher and your classmates will help you. Try to speak English in and after class as much as possible. Practice makes perfect.

Why not look for one with whom you can practise speaking English? Thus you can help each other. Don't lose heart in your spoken English, and don't be afraid of making any mistakes or being laughed at. As long as you keep on speaking English, you are sure to improve your spoken English.

Yours sincerely,

John

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】

本次书面表达三段式，简介层次分明，并合理地运用了一些高级句子。Try to speak English in and after class as much as possible. Practice makes perfect.句中运用了祈使句，增强了语气；Why not look for one with whom you can practise speaking English?句中运用了定语从句，以及采用问句的形式更能引起读者继续往下读的兴趣。