Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Three years ago, I became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient but considerate．Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class．I decide to make the best use for it. I worked hardly and got along well my teachers and classmates．Whenever I had difficulties, they were always helpful. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated．My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determines who you are．

Answer 1

1.a→an

2.Disappointing- →Disappointed

3.but→and

4.decide→decided

5.for→of

6.hardly→hard

7.well 后加with

8.student→students

9.what→which

10.去掉that

【解析】

试题分析：本文写的是因为Jenny在大学入学考试前非常紧张，作者给出的几条建议。

1.因为后面单词ordinary 为元音因素开头，所以前不定冠词用an .

2.因为disappointing 是令人失望，修饰物，而本句句意为：尽管我感到失望，这是一个倒装句失望是我感到失望用修饰人所以用disappointed .

3.把握句意，patient耐心的和considerate体贴的，是并列关系而不是转折关系所以改成and

4.时态错误。 整个短文都是过去时态讲述过去的内容，所以本句也该用一般过去时，所以改成decided .

5.固定短语。 Make the best use of ..充分利用。。。。。所以改成of。

6.高考副词词义。 Hardly 几乎不，hard，努力地，艰苦地，本句为：我努力工作所以改成hard

7.固定短语。Get along well with 与某人相处的好，本句为和老师和同学们相处的好，所以加with

8.名词单复数。本句为：一个尖子生之一，one of 后要更复数名词，所以改成students.

9.定语从句中的连词错误，本句是一个非限制性定语从句，我是尖子生之一，这增加了我的自信，逗号后面从句中少主语，关系词带整个主句，所以用which

10.…but ..连接，所以but 后面不需要再用连词that，所以去掉that。

考点：考查短文改错。