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8.近十几年,某市有越来越多的人选择出境旅游.你的文章请包括以下内容:

•描述图表,进行对照
•分析其中变化的原因
•谈谈可能产生的影响.

分析 本文是一篇图表+提纲作文.根据所提供的材料信息,写一篇短文.描述图表进行对照,分析越来越多的人选择出境旅游的原因并阐述可能产生的影响.
写作时人称以第三人称为主,时态以一般现在时为主.
写作要点:1.描述图表; 2.分析原因;3.阐述可能产生的影响.
重要短语:prefer to(更喜欢),over the last decade (在过去的十年里),a huge number of(很多),thanks to(多亏了,由于),pursue sth(追求),get tired of(因…劳累),scenic spots (旅游景点),when it comes to (当谈到,涉及到),at home and abroad(在国内国外),have a negative impact on(对某事有消极的影响),be beneficial(有利的).
【高分句型一】
1.The above table clearly mirrors an upward trend in the number of people who prefer to travel abroad over the last decade.
此处是关系代词"who"引导的定语从句,先行词为"people",关系代词"who"在从句中作主语.
【高分句型二】
2.There are a huge number of reasons behind this phenomenon,of which the most important one is--China's booming economy.
此处是"of which+最高级"引导的非限制性定语从句,主句为"There are a huge number of reasons behind this phenomenon",关系代词"which"在从句中指代"a huge number of reasons".
【高分句型三】
3. Perhaps getting tired of visiting scenic spots at home,an increasing number of them choose foreign countries as their tour destinations.
此处是由现在分词短语"getting tired of visiting scenic spots at home"作原因状语,主句为"an increasing number of them choose foreign countries as their tour destinations",主句的主语为"an increasing number of them"与所给动词"tire"存在逻辑上的被动关系.
【高分句型四】
4.What really needs to occur is consumer education.
此处是由连接代词"what"引导的主语从句,谓语动词为"is",表语为"consumer education".

解答 The above table clearly mirrors an upward trend in the number of people who prefer to travel abroad over the last decade.【高分句型一】In 1995,there are only 20 thousand tourists going overseas to take a trip.In 2000,the figure climbs to approximately 100 thousand,and peaks at 350 thousand in 2010.(描述图表)
  There are a huge number of reasons behind this phenomenon,of which the most important one is--China's booming economy.【高分句型二】Thanks to the deepening of reform and opening-up,people enjoy a sharp improvement in their living standards.They have enormous consuming power to pursue higher level of living quality.Perhaps getting tired of visiting scenic spots at home,an increasing number of them choose foreign countries as their tour destinations.【高分句型三】(分析原因)
  When it comes to what impacts it would bring,in my eyes,it would give a huge boost to tour industry both at home and abroad.And it would give Chinese deeper insights into foreign cultures.Of course,the dark side of this phenomenon also exists.For instance,the uncivilized behavior of some Chinese tourists may have a negative impact on China's image.Anyway,overseas travel is beneficial.What really needs to occur is consumer education.【高分句型四】(阐述影响)

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点.写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,平时需注意积累短语和重要句型.

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