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18.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写上修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
With more and more cars come into our families,we are happy that it has greatly improved our life.But unlucky,it has also brought many problems,such heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
Traffic safety is everybody's business.We must obey the rules.For examples,we must walk on the sidewalks.When we cross zebra-crossing,stop and look right and left,and then go across fast.Don't play the football on the road.Beside,we can tell our parents not to drink before we drive,not to run through red lights,not to use cell-phones while driven etc.
We can say cars are coming into our life,but only when everybody thought traffic safety is his or her business can we be safe driving on roads and walk on sidewalks.
分析 本文作者主要通过讲述汽车给人们带来的便利以及问题,旨在告诉人们应具有交通安全意识,并自觉遵守交通规则.现在越来越多的汽车进入了人们生活,它不仅极大地改善了人们的生活,而且也带来了很多的问题,像交通拥挤和交通事故.交通安全关系到每一个人,我们必须遵守交通规则;此外,还应告诉我们的父母在他们开车前不能喝酒;不要闯红灯;不要开着车使用电话等.最后作者提出:只有当每一个人都认为交通安全是他或她自己的事情,我们才能够安全地在道路上开车并安全地行走在人行道上.
解答 With more and more cars come into our families,we are happy that it has greatly improved our
coming
life.But unlucky,it has also brought many problems,such∧heavy traffic and traffic accidents.
unluckily as
Traffic safety is everybody's business.We must obey the rules.For examples,we must walk on the
example
sidewalks.When we cross zebra-crossing,stop and look right and left,and then go across fast.
Don't play the football on the road.Beside,we can tell our parents not to drink before we drive,
去掉the Besides they
not to run through red lights,not to use cell-phones while driven etc.
driving
We can say cars are coming into our life,but only when everybody thought traffic safety is
thinks
his or her business can we be safe driving on roads and walk on sidewalks.
walking
1.将 come改为coming 考查现在分词的用法 此处在句中作伴随状语,动词come与其逻辑主语we构成主谓关系;故用现在分词形式
2.将 unlucky改为unluckily 考查副词的用法 此处用来作状语,修饰后面的整个句子;意为:但不幸的是,它也带来了许多问题.
3.such后加as 考查固定短语 固定短语such as"例如",表示举例说明
4.将examples改为example 考查固定短语的用法 固定短语For example"例如",表示举例说明,通常用作插入语,用逗号隔开,可置于句首,句中以及句末
5.去掉the 考查固定短语的用法 通常在表示球类的名词前,不能加the; play football"踢足球"
6.将 Beside改为Besides 考查副词的用法 根据句意"不要在马路上踢足球,除此之外,我们可以告诉我们的父母在他们开车前不要喝酒."可知,此处应表示"除此之外"的意思;Beside意为:在旁边;故用Besides
7.将we改为they 考查人称代词的用法 此处的主语对应的是主句中的宾语our parents;意为:我们可以告诉我们的父母在他们开车前不要喝酒;故用人称代词they
8.将driven改为driving 考查现在分词的用法 此处在句中作伴随状语,动词drive与其逻辑主语 our parents 构成主谓关系;故用现在分词driving
9.将thought改为thinks 考查时态 本句描述的是目前的状况以及客观事实,即汽车逐渐进入了我们的生活,但是只有当每一个人都认为交通安全是他或她自己的事情,我们才能够安全地在道路上开车并安全地行走在人行道上;故用一般现在时态,由于主语是everybody"每一个人";故动词使用第三人称单数形式
10.将walk改为walking 考查现在分词的用法 此处在句中作方式状语,动词walk与其逻辑主语 we构成主谓关系;故用现在分词walking
点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.
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