题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你收到英国网友Mary的一封来信,询问爱好方面的问题。请根据以下提示回信。内容包括:
1. 人人都需要有爱好;
2. 拥有良好爱好的益处;
3. 谈谈你自己的爱好及原因。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
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Yours
Li Hi
【答案】Dear Mary,
I am very glad to hear from you. Everybody of us needs to have a hobby. Sports, music, traveling, reading and even cooking can be enjoyed as long as we love it.
Actually, hobbies are for the purpose of resisting boring time in our daily life. According to a study, spending time on your own hobbies leads to more focus and more efficient in your study or work. A hobby fuels you extra energy and excitement. I find that when you are doing your hobby, creativity maybe comes to you unexpectedly.
As for me, my favourite is cooking. Student as I am, I thinks it is a great enjoyment for me.
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给网友Mary写信,询问她爱好方面的问题。
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应以一般现在时为主
结构:总分总
要求:
1. 人人都需要有爱好;
2. 拥有良好爱好的益处;
3. 谈谈你自己的爱好及原因。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
be glad to do sth./ as long as/ for the purpose of/ daily life/ spend…on/ lead to/ focus on/ reason for
第三步:连词成句
1. Receiving your last letter made me feel very happy.
2. As is known to all, everybody needs to have a hobby.
3. Sports, music, traveling, reading and even cooking can be enjoyed as long as we love it.
4. Actually, hobbies can drive boring time away in our daily life.
5. According to a study, spending time on your own hobbies can make you more focused and efficient in your study or work.
6. A hobby fuels you extra energy and excitement.
7. I find that when doing things you love, creativity maybe comes to you unexpectedly.
8. As for me, cooking is my favorite.
9. Student as I am, I thinks it is a great enjoyment for me.
第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)
表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…
状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…
定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…
第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)