题目内容
10．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除
或修改．
Stay in the magic with your friends and family and book a hotel stay at either Disney's Hollywood Hotel and Hong Kong Disneyland Hotel．As a hotel guest，you can enjoy a extra day at Hong Kong Disneyland Park during you stay when you buy a one-day ticket!
How It Works
Hotel guests stay at either the Disney's Hollywood Hotel or Hong Kong Disneyland Hotel will receive an extra park admission for the following day．Guests can buy Stay and Play for 2Days tickets as soon as you check in at the Front Desk．Ticket price will be based in the first day a guest visits the Park．If the first visit day was a Regular Day，guests can buy Regular Day tickets even as though the followed day may be a Peak or Special Day．If the first visit day is a Peak（峰） Day，Guests should buy Peak Day tickets even though the following day may be a Regular Day．
This offer is available 13May through 30September 2016．Guests have bought their Hong Kong Disneyland Park tickets before 13May 2016can exchange their unused and not expired（过期的）ticket to Stay and Play for 2Days tickets at the Hotel Front Desk．
分析 本文主要介绍入住Disney's Hollywood Hotel和Hong Kong Disneyland Hotel的相关优惠措施和有关注意事项．
解答 Stay in the magic with your friends and family and book a hotel stay at either Disney's Hollywood Hotel and Hong Kong Disneyland Hotel．As a hotel guest，you can enjoy a extra day at Hong Kong Disneyland Park during you stay when you buy a one-day ticket!
How It Works
Hotel guests stay at either the Disney's Hollywood Hotel or Hong Kong Disneyland Hotel will receive an extra park admission for the following day．Guests can buy Stay and Play for 2Days tickets as soon as you check in at the Front Desk．Ticket price will be based in the first day a guest visits the Park．If the first visit day was a Regular Day，guests can buy Regular Day tickets even as though the followed day may be a Peak or Special Day．If the first visit day is a Peak（峰） Day，Guests should buy Peak Day tickets even though the following day may be a Regular Day．
This offer is available 13May through 30September 2016．Guests∧have bought their Hong Kong Disneyland Park tickets before 13May 2016 can exchange their unused and not expired（过期的）ticket to Stay and Play for 2Days tickets at the Hotel Front Desk．
详解：
1．and改为or 考查固定搭配．either…or…意为"或…或…"，是固定搭配．
2．a改为an 考查冠词．day是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词表示泛指，因extra读音以发元音开头，用不定冠词an．
73．you改为your 考查代词．stay是名词，其前用形容词性物主代词作定语．
4．stay改为staying 考查现在分词．guests与stay之间是主谓关系，用现在分词短语staying at either the Disney's Hollywood Hotel or Hong Kong Disneyland Hotel 作后置定语．
5．in改为on 考查固定搭配．be based on意为"根据； 以…为基准"，是固定搭配．
6．was改为is 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是一般事实，用一般现在时态．
7．去掉as 考查固定搭配．even though意为"即使，纵然"，是固定搭配．
8．followed改为following 考查固定搭配．the following day意为"第二天"，是固定搭配．
9．加who/that 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词Guests在从句中作主语，用有关系代词who/that．
10．ticket改为tickets 考查名词复数．ticket是可数名词，根据上下文语境，此处要用复数形式．
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．
