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1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉． 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up．To my opinion，it is hard to be successful．Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up．And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try．That's okay．Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failures．J．K．Rowling，wrote Harry Potter，had her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published．Michael Jordan was removed his high school basketball team．He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career．But he once said，"I have failed over and over and over again in my life．And that's because I succeed．"

Answer 1

分析 本文叙述了挑战是在我们人生中必要的一部分．还列举了杰克•罗琳的第一本《哈利波特》被拒绝了12次才出版的故事；迈克尔乔丹被从他的高中篮球队裁下来，错失了很多进球，终于成功了的故事．

解答 It doesn't matter to fail as long as you don't give up．To my opinion，it is hard to be successful．Challenges were a necessary part of your life as you grow up．And you won't necessary succeed in everything for the first time you try．That's okay．Some of the most successful people in the world are the one who've had the most failures．J．K．Rowling，∧wrote Harry Potter，had her first Harry Potter book was rejected 12 times before it was finally published．Michael Jordan was removed∧his high school basketball team．He lost hundreds of games and miss thousands of shots during his career．But he once said，"I have failed over and over and over again in my life．And that's because I succeed．"
详解：
1．To改为In 考查介词．in one's opinion 意为"依某人来看"，是固定搭配．
2．were改为are 考查动词时态．根据时间状语从句as you grow up，此处应用一般现在时．
3．necessary改为necessarily 考查副词．succeed是动词，要用副词修饰．
4．去掉for 考查连词．for the first time 意为"首次，第一次"，作独立作状语；the first time意为"第一次"，是连词，后接从句，不能独立使用．此处有从句 you try，故用连词 the first time．因此去掉介词for．
5．one改为ones 考查代词．根据the one代指的是some of the most successful people一些成功的人，是复数，故此处应用ones，即：世界上有一些最成功的人就是曾经最失败的人．
6．加who 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词J．K．Rowling在从句中作主语，用关系代词who．
7．去掉was 考查词语用法．have sth．done意为"遭受"．根据句意：她的第一部《哈利•波特》被拒绝了12次．此处去掉动词was．
8．加from 考查介词．根据句意：迈克尔乔丹被从他的高中篮球队裁下来．remove from意为"从…中移开〔拿走，除掉〕"，此处应加上介词from
9．miss改为missed 考查动词时态． and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，前面的动词lost是一般过去时，此处也是一般过去时．
10．because改为why 考查连词．根据句意：这就是我为什么成功了．用连词why，此处是强调结果的表语从句，because用于强调原因．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．