Question

2．学校英文报社正在进行题目为"My Favorite Proverb"的征文活动．请根据图中谚语（proverb）写一篇英语短文，给英语校报投稿．要点如下：
1．你的理解和看法：
2．举例说明理由．

注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．题目已给出，不计入总词数．
My Favorite Proverb
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Answer 1

分析 本文是"图片+提纲类"形式，根据文章图片和所给提示信息写一篇短文，阐述对图中谚语（proverb）的理解和看法并举例说明．既是看图作文又是提纲类作文．
写作要点：1．对该谚语的理解；2．举例说明理由；
写作时时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主．人称以第一人称为主．
重要短语：inspire sb to do sth （鼓舞某人做某事），achieve great success（取得巨大成功），at the very beginning（在一开始），illustrate sth（解释某物），began to do sth （开始做某事），used to do （过去曾经做某事），make mistakes（犯错误），give it up （放弃），encourage sb to do（鼓励某人做某事），keep sth on（继续做某事），not only…，but also…（不但，而且），in public（在公共场所），talk with sb fluently（流利地与某人交谈）．
【高分句型一】
1．"Practice makes perfect！"is my favorite proverb，which has inspired me to achieve great success．
此处是由关系代词"which"引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词"which"在从句中作主语，指代前面整个主句的内容．
【高分句型二】
2．Whatever we do，we can not do it well at the very beginning．
此处是由连接代词"whatever"引导的让步状语从句，可以理解为"No matter what we do"，主句为"we can not do it well at the very beginning"．
【高分句型三】
3．However，the more we practice，the better we will do it，just as the proverb illustrates．
此处是"The+形容词比较级+主语+谓语，the+形容词比较级+主语+谓语"，意为"越来…越…"
【高分句型四】
4．It was my teacher who encouraged me to keep it on．
此处是强调句型，如果去掉强调句型的骨架"It was/is …that"，原句句子成分齐全，句意通顺．
【高分句型五】
5．Later，not only can I speak English in public，but also I can talk with foreigners fluently．
此处是由部分倒装句型，结构为"not only+一般疑问句形式，but also+句子"，即"not only"引导的句子需倒装，而"but also"引导的句子不需倒装．

解答 My Favorite Proverb
"Practice makes perfect！"is my favorite proverb，which has inspired me to achieve great success．【高分句型一】As we know，the proverb mentioned above is very simple to understand．Whatever we do，we can not do it well at the very beginning．【高分句型二】However，the more we practice，the better we will do it，just as the proverb illustrates．【高分句型三】（你的理解和看法）
   When I began to speak English，I used to make mistakes．And I wanted to give it up．It was my teacher who encouraged me to keep it on．【高分句型四】"Practice makes perfect！"was repeated around me．Later，not only can I speak English in public，but also I can talk with foreigners fluently．【高分句型五】（举例说明理由）
   Such is my favorite proverb，a simple but an effective one．

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．