题目内容
5.假设你是李华,暑假去美国旅游期间,住在你的美国笔友Chris 家中,他们一家人为你提供了吃,住,旅游方面的帮助,请写一封感谢信表达对他们的感谢.内容如下:
1.感谢Chris 一家
2.你的收获和感受
3.邀请Chris 一家来中国旅游
注意:
1.词数100 字左右
2.适当增加细节,使行文连贯
3.信的开头和结尾已经给出(不计字数)
Dear Chris,
How are you and your family doing these days?
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假设你是李华,暑假去美国旅游期间,住在你的美国笔友Chris 家中,他们一家人为你提供了吃,住,旅游方面的帮助,请写一封感谢信表达对他们的感谢.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:感谢Chris 一家;你的收获和感受;邀请Chris 一家来中国旅游 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:come to an end结束; Firstly首先;not only…but (also)不仅,而且;What's more而且;wholeheartedly全身心地;be eager to渴望去做;keep sb informed of使某人获悉;What do you think of …你认为…怎么样?
Firstly,I will have to say that your considerate arrangements for my accommodation and dinning added so much to my journey.(高分句型一)
I did not only enjoy your home's cozy atmosphere,but gained essential knowledge of American culture.(高分句型二)
My family appreciated your hospitality and help,and they are ready to welcome all of you wholeheartedly.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Chris,
How are you and your family doing these days?My trip to America has come to an end,and now I'm writing to express my most sincere appreciation to you and your family.
Firstly,I will have to say that your considerate arrangements for my accommodation and dinning added so much to my journey.(高分句型一)I did not only enjoy your home's cozy atmosphere,but gained essential knowledge of American culture.(高分句型二)Being immersed in such an open and colorful culture was such as a pleasure!And I was more than happy to share my summer holiday with such a kind and harmonious family as yours.kind and harmonious family as yours.
What's more,I'd like to extend to your family an invitation to China next year!My family appreciated your hospitality and help,and they are ready to welcome all of you wholeheartedly.(高分句型三)I am also eager to show you my own culture.Embracing Chinese culture surely will enhance our friendship and truly pay your family back!
What do you think of my suggestion?Please keep me informed of your decision!Write back soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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A. | even if | B. | as long as | C. | in case | D. | ever since |
A. | universal | B. | favorable | C. | attractive | D. | generous |
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36.A.casual | B.special | C.ordinary | D.attractive |
37.A.Unfortunately | B.Frequently | C.Hopefully | D.Fortunately |
38.A.focused on | B.left out | C.commented On | D.made out |
39.A.necessary | B.possible | C.convenient | D.essential |
40.A.never | B.often | C.usually | D.just |
41.A.clothing | B.jewelry | C.decoration | D.furniture |
42.A.and | B.yet | C.but | D.although |
43.A.Happiness | B.Tiredness | C.Beauty | D.Fortune |
44.A.common | B.cultural | C.traveling | D.quality |
45.A.performing | B.requiring | C.interviewing | D.working |
46.A.look | B.sound | C.smell | D.feel |
47.A.worse | B.better | C.less | D.funnier |
48.A.puzzle | B.mistake | C.idea | D.progress |
49.A.more than | B.less than | C.rather than | D.other than |
50.A.mustn't | B.couldn't | C.needn't | D.daren't |
51.A.supposed | B.permitted | C.requested | D.promised |
52.A.letting | B.allowing | C.recommending | D.preventing |
53.A.which | B.that | C.what | D.why |
54.A.guides | B.sends | C.misleads | D.applies |
55.A.mind | B.reason | C.time | D.path |