题目内容
6．最近你班就高三学生是否应该组织集体春游进行了讨论．以下是讨论的情况．请你用英语写一篇短文，反映讨论结果并谈谈自己的看法，然后发表在你校英语论坛上．| 赞成（62%）的理由 | 反对（38%）的理由 |
| 1．亲近大自然，拓宽视野； 2．增强沟通、合作能力； 3．结交新朋友． | 1．占用宝贵的学习时间； 2．安全很难保证． |
Recently，our class has had a discussion about whether Senior Three students should go on a group spring outing．Recently，our class has had a discussion about whether Senior Three students should go on a group spring outing．They take different attitudes towards it．
62% of the students say yes．In their opinion，going on a group spring outing can not only enable them to get close to nature and broaden their horizons，but also help improve communication and cooperation skills．（高分句型一）Furthermore，it gives more opportunities to make new friends．However，38% of the students hold the opposite opinion．They think that they are supposed to concentrate their energies on studying，because the university entrance examinations are around the corner．The outing is a waste of time．Meanwhile，they can't prepare for every emergency．
As for me，we can benefit a lot from the activity only if safety measures are adopted properly．（高分句型二）On the whole，I am in favour of the former．
Yours，
Li Hua．
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息针对用英语写一篇短文，反映讨论结果并谈谈自己的看法，然后发表在你校英语论坛上，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从不同观点和理由两个方面来讨论该话题 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：not only，but also 不仅，而且； get close to靠近，接近；Furthermore而且；However然而；are supposed to应该；Meanwhile同时；As for至于，关于On the whole总的来说
In their opinion，going on a group spring outing can not only enable them to get close to nature and broaden their horizons，but also help improve communication and cooperation skills．（高分句型一）
As for me，we can benefit a lot from the activity only if safety measures are adopted properly．（高分句型二）
解答 Recently，our class has had a discussion about whether Senior Three students should go on a group spring outing．They take different attitudes towards it．
62% of the students say yes．In their opinion，going on a group spring outing can not only enable them to get close to nature and broaden their horizons，but also help improve communication and cooperation skills．（高分句型一）Furthermore，it gives more opportunities to make new friends．However，38% of the students hold the opposite opinion．They think that they are supposed to concentrate their energies on studying，because the university entrance examinations are around the corner．The outing is a waste of time．Meanwhile，they can't prepare for every emergency．
As for me，we can benefit a lot from the activity only if safety measures are adopted properly．（高分句型二）On the whole，I am in favour of the former．
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．
暑假作业北京艺术与科学电子出版社系列答案
第三学期赢在暑假系列答案This question of giving up seats in public transport is much argued about by young men，who say that since women have claimed equality，they no longer deserve to be treated with politeness and that those who go out to work should take their turns in the rat race like anyone else．But women have never claimed to be physically strong as men．Even if it is not agreed，however，the fact remains that courtesy（礼节） should be shown to the old and the sick．Are we really so lost to all ideals of unselfishness that we can sit there indifferently（冷漠地） reading the paper or a book，saying to ourselves，"First come，first served"while a grey-haired woman，a mother with a young child or a cripple（残障者） stands？Yet this is all too often seen．
Older people，tired and impatient from a day's work，are not always considerate either-far from it．Many arguments break out as the older people push and squeeze（挤）each other to get on buses．One cannot approve this，of course，but one does feel there is just a little more excuse．
It seems urgent，not only that communications in transport should be improved，but also that communication between human beings should be kept smooth and polite．All over cities，it seems that people are too tired and too rushed to be polite．Shop assistants won't bother to assist； taxi drivers shout at each other as they dash dangerously around corners； bus conductors pull the bell before their desperate passengers have time to get on or off the bus，and so on．It seems to us that it is up to the young to do their small part to stop such lowering of moral standards．
Title：Manners in Metropolitan Cities
| Theme | Politeness is （76）non-existent，especially in large cities． | |
| Phenomena and Excuses | Phenomena | Excuses |
| Big，strong schoolboys push elderly women aside to （77）sit on the last remaining seats． | ||
| Young men （78）refuse/hate/dislike to treat women politely． | Women think they are（79）equalto men，so they should take their turns in the rat race like others． | |
| Young people sit indifferently （80）indifferently while grey-haired women，mothers with （81）children/babiesand disabled people stand by． | First come，first served． | |
| The elderly themselves push each other to get on buses． | ||
| （82）Causes/Analysis | ●Communications in transport are not satisfactory． ●Communication between people doesn't go （83）smoothly and politely． ●People are too （84）tired and too rushed to care about others． | |
| Solution | Young people make an （85）effort to stop such lowering of moral standards． | |