题目内容
【题目】生活中充满了选择,学会自主选择有助于我们的成长。请以“An important choice I have made”为题,用英语写一篇100~120词的短文,记述一次对你影响深远的选择。
短文内容包括:
1.记述选择的经过;
2.结合此次经历,简要说明自主选择的重要性。
注意:文章的标题已给出,不计入词数。
An important choice I have made
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【答案】
An important choice I have made
Life is full of choices,and to live is to choose .It was not until last year when I was asked to decide on arts or science that I came to realize the importance of making choices. My caring parents suggested I go in for science for a promising future career. Having assessed my strengths and weaknesses,I myself,however,was determined to take up arts instead since history and English were what interested me most. For the first time ever,I have followed my heart and enjoyed everything all along.
I pride myself on making the choice on my own,which actually brings me a sense of
fulfillment and dignity. Definitely,it's also a milestone moment for me to think for myself and learn to be responsible for my own future.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出,根据所给要点,本文可分两段来写:第一段讲述关于自己选择的一件事;第二段结合自己的经历说明自主选择的重要性。写作时可结合自身实际经验,适当增加细节以使行文连贯;同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语短文,共两段。内容齐全,层次分明,语句通顺,布局合理,文中使用高级句子。It was not until last year when I was asked to decide on arts or science that I came to realize the importance of making choices. not until的强调句式堪称经典;My caring parents suggested I go in for science for a promising future career. Suggest后面的宾语从句运用虚拟语气(should)+动词原形;Having assessed my strengths and weaknesses,I myself,however,was determined to take up arts instead since history and English were what interested me most.现在分词作时间状语;English were what interested me most what引导表语从句;I pride myself on making the choice on my own,which actually brings me a sense of fulfillment and dignity.非限制性定语从句使用巧妙。

【题目】阅读使人明智,阅读使人充实。阅读的好处很多,但是,目前许多中学生都不重视阅读。请你根据下表内容写一篇100字的英语短文,对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。文中不能出现真实的人名,校名和地名。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
内容要点如下:
不重视阅读的原因 | 如:1. 作业太多 2. 时间花在...... |
阅读的好处 | 如:1. 开阔眼界,获得知识 2. 学会如何思考 3. 生活更加丰富多彩 |
你的建议 | 如:养成良好的读书习惯...... |
At present only a few students do some reading after class. Here are several reasons. ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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