Question

【题目】假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Generally speaking, I’m a person who have the ability to control myself. Whether at school and at home, I can be aware of the dos and don’ts and always focus on my study, so I am the one of the top students in my class. Besides, whenever I meet with anything or somebody unpleasant, I can calm down and only in this way can I get along good with others.

I think it is determination what is of great importance if you want to improve your self-control.

In order control yourself easily and effectively, you are supposed to make some rule to follow. Also you’d better ask others to keep an eye on yourself, which makes the difference in helping you be responsible to what you do.

Answer 1

【答案】

Generally speaking, I’m a person who have (has)the ability to control myself. Whether at school and(or) at home, I can be aware of the dos and don’ts and always focus on my study, so I am the one of the top students in my class. Besides, whenever I meet with anything (something) somebody unpleasant, I can calm down and only in this way can I get along good(well) with others.

I think it is determination what(that) is of great importance if you want to improve your self-control.

In order加 to control yourself easily and effectively, you are supposed to make some rule (rules)to follow. Also you’d better ask others to keep an eye on your behaviors, which makes the (a)difference in helping you be responsible to (for)what you do.

【解析】

一般说来，我是一个有自制力的人。不管是在家还是在学校，我都很清楚地知道什么该做，什么不该做，而且总是专注于我的学习。

【1】have→has考查定语从句。Who引导的定语从句修饰a person，故谓语用第三人称单数。

【2】and→or考查关联词。根据语境，此处句意为不管是在学校或在家，两者之间是二选一的关系，而and表示并列的关系，改为or。

【3】去掉the考察定冠词。定冠词the表示特定的某个人或某个物，而这里one of the top students并不表示特指，the多余，去掉the。

【4】anything→something考查代词。Anything表示任何事，任何人，多用于否定句和疑问句，something表示一些人，一些事。符合题意。

【5】good→well考查副词。Good是形容词，表示好的，好；well是副词，表示好的，好；此处的good修饰动词短语get along with others“与他人相处融洽”，用副词修饰，改为well。

【6】what→that考查连词。What多引导名词性从句，如宾语从句，表语从句，同位语从句等，但通常都在从句中扮演某些成分；that引导主语从句时通常用it作主语，从句后置，不做成分且无意义；分析句子，从句的主语是a determination，that无意义，但不可省略。

【7】order后加to考查固定搭配。In order to “为了”，固定搭配，通常用于句首。

【8】rule→rules考查名词复数。Some表示“一些”，修饰的名词用复数，rule改为rules。

【9】the→a考查固定搭配。The定冠词，特指某人或某物；a是不定冠词，表示“一个”；make a difference“有影响，有关系”，make the difference“有影响，很重要”，强调产生了差别。

【10】to→for考查固定搭配。Be responsible for sth“对某事负责”；be responsible to sb“对某人负责”。