Question

12．假如你是一名高二年级的学生，你发现班上有些同学晚上学习到深夜．白天也不安排休息时间，但往往课堂上昏昏欲睡，有些同学饮食习惯不好，不吃早餐．请你写篇发言稿，在班会上劝同学们合理安排作息时间，注意健康饮食，保证学习好、身体好．．要求：1．字数100字左右． 2．可适当发挥，使讲话完整通畅．
Dear classmates，
It's a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today．
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分析 假如你是一名高二年级的学生，你发现班上有些同学晚上学习到深夜．白天也不安排休息时间，但往往课堂上昏昏欲睡，有些同学饮食习惯不好，不吃早餐．请你写篇发言稿，在班会上劝同学们合理安排作息时间，注意健康饮食，保证学习好、身体好．．写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系．根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩．
【亮点说明】It's a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today．运用固定句式； And some classmates seldom have breakfast，which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health．
运用定语从句；In my opinion，it's extremely important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet．运用并列句；We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well．I wonder if you agree with me．运用only的倒装句；Recently，I have found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day either，but they often cannot help falling asleep in class．此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次．

解答 Dear classmates，
      It's a pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today．Recently，I have found that some of our classmates study late into the night and do not spare any time to take a rest during the day either，but they often cannot help falling asleep in class．（高分句型一） And some classmates seldom have breakfast，which is also a bad habit and will surely do harm to their health．（高分句型二）
      In my opinion，it's extremely important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet．We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well．（高分句型三）I wonder if you agree with me．
      Thank you!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．