题目内容
【题目】请你根据以下要点,以“My year of 2017”为话题写一篇英语短文。
要点:
1.你在2017年的梦想;
2.你如何实现你的梦想。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.文中不得出现自己的真实信息。
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【答案】2017 is a once-a-year chance to make a fresh start,to let go of failures,frustrations,and friction—and begin all over again.
In 2017, I wish to improve my relationship with my family and my friends.I'll spend more time talking with my family about my study to get them to know what I think about.I won't cover my ideas to make myself understood.In my free time,I'm going to help with some housework.I'll try my best to help my friends when they are in trouble.I'll do all I can to make myself a good friend.
【解析】试题分析:本文要求根据以下要点,以“My year of 2017”为话题写一篇英语短文。
要点:1.你在2017年的梦想;2.你如何实现你的梦想。首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用,主次分明,详略得当,语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
本文采用两段式,主题明确,内容齐全,结构布局合理,同时使用高级句子。to know what I think about.what引导宾语从句;I'll try my best to help my friends when they are in trouble.when引导时间状语从句;I'll do all I can to make myself a good friend.定语从句和动词不定式做目的状语完美结合;另外,let go of,spend more time talking with,to make myself understood,In my free time, try my best to help等的运用为文章增色添彩。