题目内容
4.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在此符号下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(╲)划掉
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词
I have been in China for 3year.My friends in American sometimes write to me,asking me how long I'll stay here,when I'm thinking of returning home.The answer of their questions is simply:I do not know when I will return home.At the moment,I have no reason to return back to America.I liked living in China.Beside,I enjoy meeting Chinese people and travel around the country.My work is very interested,and there are so many things I don't know about China that I hope to discover it in the future.
分析 本文主要讲述作者回复朋友是否回美国.作者不知道什么时候回去,因为他喜欢遇到中国人,也喜欢旅游中国,还有许多需要了解的事情.
解答 I have been in China for 3 year.My friends in American sometimes write to me,asking me how long I'll stay here,∧when I'm thinking of returning home.The answer of their questions is simply:I do not know when I will return home.At the moment,I have no reason to return back to America.I liked living in China.Beside,I enjoy meeting Chinese people and travel around the country.My work is very interested,and there are so many things I don't know about China that I hope to discover it in the future.
详解:
1.year改为years 考查名词复数.year是可数名词,其前有数词three修饰时用复数形式.
2.American改为America 考查名词.in是介词,后接名词作宾语.形容词American的名词是America.
3.加and 考查连词.how long I'll stay here和when I'm thinking of returning home是并列的宾语从句,用and连接.
4.simply改为simple 考查形容词.is后用形容词作表语,副词simply的形容词是simple.
5.去掉back 考查词语用法.return意为"返回",包含有back的意思,back是多余的,要去掉.
6.liked改为like 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是现在的事情,用一般现在时态.
7.Beside改为Besides 考查副词.beside意为"在…旁边;在…附近",是介词,besides意为"而且,也",是副词,此处应是:而且,也.
8.travel改为traveling 考查动名词.meeting和traveling都是动名词,作enjoy的并列宾语.
9.interested改为interesting 考查现在分词.现在分词作表语主要表示主语的性质和特征.
10.it改为them 考查代词.them指代前文的many things.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.