题目内容

短文改错

Climbing is my favourite sport. I am very fond it,
1.________
specially in late autumn. One day, early in the morning the
2.________
friends and I put on our sports shoes and start off. After
3.________
chimbing for half an hour, we got to the foot of the mountain.
4.________
There we had a very good view miles around. In the north,
5.________
a big river crosses the city. There are many ships sail
6.________
busily. A lot of beauty trees are there, too.
7.________
The sun started to go down, for it was time for us
8.________
to go back. On the way back, we were laughing and
9.________
talking all the time. We had a good time on that day.
10.________
答案:
解析:

  1.在fond后加上ofbe fond of意为“喜欢”是固定短语,其中的介词of不可省略。

  2the改为my。在短文中第一次提及friends,应指明是谁的朋友。根据上下文可知此处指的应是“我”的朋友。

  3start改为startedstartput on是并列关系,在句中均作谓语,start也应用一般过去时态,前后一致。

  4foot改为top。从上文的climbing for half an hour可知应到达了“山顶”而不是“山脚下”。

  5In改为To。根据上下文可知,“大河”不是在山里面的北部(即河不在山上)而是在山的北面。

  6sail改为sailingsailing在句中作后置定语修饰shipsshipssail所表示的动作之间是主动关系,应用现在分词形式。

  7beauty改为beautiful。一般不用抽象名词而应用形容词作定语修饰名词。

  8for改为soand。根据常识可知,“大阳开始落山”与“是我们该返回的时候了”之间不是前果后因的关系而是前因后果的关系。

  9.√。

  10.去掉onthat day在句中作时间状语时,其前常不用介词。


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第二卷(共35分)
第四部分 写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多—个词:把多余的诃用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错的不要改。
Today we went to climb the West Hill.Early in morning    76.__________________
we started out and arrived an hour late.Then we began     77.__________________
to climb.The hill was high and some of us got tired        78.__________________
soon, and all of us were very excited.We cheered          79.__________________
happily when we got the top.We had our lunch there       80.__________________
and had enjoyed ourselves very much.Unfortunately,     81.__________________
when we walked down the hill,We were caught by         82.__________________
a rain.We remained calmly,shared umbrellas and         83.__________________
raincoats and walked carefully.Finally we both reached     84.__________________
the parking lot safely.In spite of the unexpecting rain       85.__________________
and wind,we had a good time.

第二卷(共35分)

第四部分 写作(共两节,满分35分)

第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:

此行多—个词:把多余的诃用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。

此行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

此行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意:原行没有错的不要改。

Today we went to climb the West Hill.Early in morning    76.__________________

we started out and arrived an hour late.Then we began     77.__________________

to climb.The hill was high and some of us got tired        78.__________________

soon, and all of us were very excited.We cheered          79.__________________

happily when we got the top.We had our lunch there       80.__________________

and had enjoyed ourselves very much.Unfortunately,     81.__________________

when we walked down the hill,We were caught by         82.__________________

a rain.We remained calmly,shared umbrellas and         83.__________________

raincoats and walked carefully.Finally we both reached     84.__________________

the parking lot safely.In spite of the unexpecting rain       85.__________________

and wind,we had a good time.

 

第二节:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:

该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。

该行缺一个词:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

该行错一个词:在错的词下划一横线,在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

注意:原行没有错的不要改。(注意:将本题必须在答题纸上作答)

The summer holiday, when I’m looking forward to,                    86. _____________

is coming. What a fun it is to go fishing! Playing football                87. _____________

is one of my hobby. I can ride my bicycle, climb high                            88. _____________

mountains, or go swimming. Sometime I can play chess               89. _____________

with my grandfather. How interested my holiday will be!                 90. _____________

But my father is always afraid I might be hurt on a truck,                 91. _____________

fall into a river or fall out a tree. He is also                              92. _____________

afraid I might be taken away by bad people.                              93. _____________

And I wonder how these will happen if I’m careful                         94. _____________

enough. I’ll try best to convince my father.                                     95­­­­­­­­. _____________

 

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