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10．假如你是学生会主席李华，为了让国人了解中华民族的传统文化，学生会面向学校国际部组织留学生报名参加"汉字听写大赛"，请你根据提示写一则英文通知，在校报上刊登．主要内容包括：
1．报名时请告知姓名和国籍；
2．听写范围：中国四大名著中的词汇；
3．参赛日期：2017年5月15日；
4．奖品：一套中国四大名著；
5．报名联系人：李华；电话：12345678910．
注意：词数100左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅．开头已为你写好．不计入总词数．
参考词汇：1、四大名著：the Four Great Classical Novels
2、汉字听写大赛  Chinese Character Dictation Competition
Notice
Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture？Here comes your opportunity：the Student Union will organize a Chinese Character Dictation Competition．I'd like to share with you some details．
As scheduled，the competition is to be held on May 15th，2017．（高分句型一）You are supposed to get prepared before the competition．Above all，it's recommended that you should read the Four Great Classical Novels and focus on the Chinese characters in them．（高分句型二）Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture，please sign up for the competition as soon as possible．（高分句型三） If you want to go，please call Li Hua at 12345678910，stating your name and nationality．Don't miss the chance of being the winner，and the appealing prize"a set of the four Great Classical Novels"is eagerly waiting for you．
Come on，don't hesitate to take part!I'm sure you will benefit a lot and your Chinese will gain much progress．．

Answer 1

分析 本文要求考生以李华的身份写一则英文启事，欢迎学校国际部组织外国留学生报名参加"汉字听写大赛"．要使用第三人称和一般现在时为主的时态．要点：1．听写范围：中国四大名著中的词汇．2．参赛日期：2017年5月15日．3．奖品：一套中国古典名著．4．报名联系人：李华；电话：12345678910；本文属于应用文中的启事，一定要注意启事的格式和过渡语．同时要注意使用熟悉的句式和词汇，适当使用串联词，不要显得过于堆砌．
【名师点睛】
本篇范文结构合理，涵盖了所有要点．且在各部分之间添加了适当内容，让要点的转折更流畅．另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力．作者在范文中使用了较多的复合句式，如倒装句Here comes your opportunity．虚拟语气及形式主语句it's recommended that you should read the Four Great Classical Novels and focus on the Chinese characters in them．主语从句Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture．另外文章中使用了较多的高级词汇，如be supposed to do sth、get prepared、recommend以及benefit a lot等．这些技巧及词汇的使用让文章显得更有文采．

解答 Notice
      Do you want to have a further knowledge of Chinese culture？Here comes your opportunity：the Student Union will organize a Chinese Character Dictation Competition．I'd like to share with you some details．
      As scheduled，the competition is to be held on May 15th，2017．（高分句型一）You are supposed to get prepared before the competition．Above all，it's recommended that you should read the Four Great Classical Novels and focus on the Chinese characters in them．（高分句型二）Whoever feels interested and has a passion for Chinese culture，please sign up for the competition as soon as possible．（高分句型三） If you want to go，please call Li Hua at 12345678910，stating your name and nationality．Don't miss the chance of being the winner，and the appealing prize"a set of the four Great Classical Novels"is eagerly waiting for you．
      Come on，don't hesitate to take part!I'm sure you will benefit a lot and your Chinese will gain much progress．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．