题目内容
四川“5.12”特大地震发生之后,你们学校普及地震知识,请你根据下列提示写一份地震知识汇报。
【写作内容】
How to stay safe during an earthquake?
地震突如其来(unexpected),可能会随时发生;
最好的方法是作好充分准备,装备好(be equipped with)救生包(emergency kit),里面有电筒(flashlight)、电池、食物和急救包(first-aid kit);
当地震发生时最好躲在桌子下面或者用垫子(cushion)保护头部免受伤害;
与此同时,留意电台有关地震的最新消息。
【写作要求】:1. 只能用5句话表达
2. 句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。
How to stay safe during an earthquake?
Earthquake is unexpected and can break out at anytime. The best way to stay in an earthquake is to be well prepared. You should always have an emergency kit filled with flashlights, batteries, food and a first-aid kit in your home. Get under a table if you are near it and take cover under a cushion to protect your head. What’s more, listen to the radio for the latest news.
【解析】这是一篇材料类写作,根据所给中文意思,写一遍关于地震以及防御的作文。考生在写作时要注意所给信息,以及写作要求。要以最简洁的话语传达出题目要表达的意思。本篇作文给出的提示单词很多,所以写作难度会有所降低,但为了是整篇文章通顺流畅,考生要善于使用连接词。例如,as we all know、What’s more等的使用。【亮点分析】本篇文章准确精炼的表达了题目所给信息,让读者看了,有一目了然的感受。开头第一句Earthquake is unexpected and can break out at anytime.使用动词短语并列,点出地震不可预测性的事实,为下面阐述如何做好地震准备做好了铺垫。接着使用一个主语从句The best way to stay in an earthquake is to be well prepared.说明解决地震问题的办法。接着举例说明在地震中需要准备的东西。该句还使用过去分词做后置定语的结构You should always have an emergency kit filled with flashlights, batteries, food and a first-aid kit in your home.,提高了文章的档次。最后以祈使句What’s more, listen to the radio for the latest news.结尾,向人们传达了自己的建议。另外,整篇文章中还使用了很多短语和表达,例如,break out爆发,发生;an emergency kit紧急装备等。
考点:考查材料类作文的表达