Question

【题目】你是李华，你很烦恼。最近，每天早晚，你们小区广场上都有很多人在跳广场舞，持续时间长且噪音大，给你和小区里其他人带来了很多的不便……请你给小区委员会领导写封信，反映现象及其导致的不便（要求涉及生活、学习和工作等方面）并提出合理建议。

词数120左右；

短文的开关和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir,

I am writing to tell you something about the people doing the square dance in our community, which

has made me terribly upset.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir,

I am writing to tell you something about the people doing the square dance in our community, which

has made me terribly upset.

Recently, every morning and evening, many people gather to dance in our community square, which does help to keep healthy. However, the long-time dancing and the noise pollution caused by the loudspeaker really bring about unbearable inconveniences.

We can’t rest or sleep well. As a result, the students are not only late for school but also sleepy in class, and the workers are easily tired out while working.

Here are some suggestions on solving the problem. They are supposed either to shorten the dancing time and reduce the music noise or to make another choice of dancing places. Only in this way can they have fun and let others enjoy life.

Would you please communicate with the organizers about what I said?

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本题是一篇书信类作文，需要写出给小区委员会领导写封信，反映现象及其导致的不便（要求涉及生活、学习和工作等方面）并提出合理建议。需要注意：词数120左右；短文的开关和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。要求学生要读好题干，不要逐句翻译，写出自己的观点。

亮点说明：本文考查了学生对书信类作文的写作能力，运用了一般现在时，和进行时等时态，很好的写出了文章所要求的各种观点，真挚的写出了自己面对的问题。而且文章错误较少，虽然不华丽，但是非常朴实，是一篇比较基础的作文。