题目内容
【题目】假如你叫李华。你的好朋友简最近发现自己在发胖,很苦恼。她写信请你给她就如何避免这一情况提建议。请你根据下面的内容给简写一封信,词数100左右。
要想减肥,应做到以下三点:
1.要保证健康饮食。
2.多参加锻炼。
3.喝足够的水。
May 5th
Dear Jane,________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】May 5th
Dear Jane,
I’m sorry to hear that you are worried about being fat. I hope the following advice can help you.
First, you should have a healthy diet. In order to lose weight, you should eat some vegetables and fruit. And stay away from food that is rich in fat. Second, take more exercise. The more active you become, the more fat you will burn off and the thinner you will be. Third, drink enough water. Drinking enough water can support your body and activities, and help you lose weight.
If you follow the advice, you will be sure to become thinner and stay healthy.
Best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】试题分析:本文试题为应用文中的书信写作,试题只给出写作框架,并未给出所有的具体写作细节,为半开放性写作。写好此文,需注意三点:一是写信格式要准确,信的开头已经给出,但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当,本文应重点写你的朋友间想减肥,她应做到以下三点:要保证健康饮食;多参加锻炼;喝足够的水。三要注意适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,以使行文连贯。另外,在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【亮点说明】
本文是一封书信,格式正确,内容符合要求,句子衔接紧密,文中使用高级句子。I’m sorry to hear that you are worried about being fat文中使用宾语从句;In order to lose weight, you should eat some vegetables and fruit.动词不定式做目的状语;The more active you become, the more fat you will burn off and the thinner you will be.比较级句式运用巧妙;Drinking enough water can support your body and activities,动名词短语做主语; If you follow the advice, you will be sure to become thinner and stay healthy.if条件句使用恰当。