题目内容
3.你是李华,端午节期间 (the Dragon Boat Festival/Duanwu festtival)你的一个朋友Smith准备到你所在的城市来旅游,但你有事不能接机,写封信给他.内容包括以下要点:
1.解释你不能接机的原因
2.并说明端午节期间的安排.
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.你可能用到的词汇 (Zongzi,the Dragon Boat Races)
Dear Smith,
I'm glad to know that you are coming to my city during the Dragon Boat Festival.
However,I'm afraid there's some bad news.I'm planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit.All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference.More importantly,I'm lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference.I really can't miss it.
I understand that it'll be your first time to this city and I'm your only friend here.I've asked my roommate to meet you at the airport,and you can stay in my room.He is a very nice person and he willstay with youduring theFestival!At the same time,you'll taste the Chinese traditional food--Zongzi and watch the exciting race--theDragonBoatRaces.I'm sure you will have a good time.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息端午节期间 (the Dragon Boat Festival/Duanwu festtival)你的一个朋友Smith准备到你所在的城市来旅游,但你有事不能接机,写封信给他,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:解释你不能接机的原因;并说明端午节期间的安排 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:However然而;take part in参加;show up出现,现身;More importantly更重要的是;give a speech做演讲;have a good time过得愉快;
I'm planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit.(高分句型一)
More importantly,I'm lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference.(高分句型二)
At the same time,you'll taste the Chinese traditional food--Zongzi and watch the exciting race--the Dragon Boat Races.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Smith,
I'm glad to know that you are coming to my city during the Dragon Boat Festival.
However,I'm afraid there's some bad news.I'm planning to take part in an international conference to be held in another city during the time of your visit.(高分句型一)All the top scientists in my field will show up at the conference.More importantly,I'm lucky enough to have been selected to give a speech on behalf of my research team at the Conference.(高分句型二)I really can't miss it.(解释你不能接机的原因)
I understand that it'll be your first time to this city and I'm your only friend here.I've asked my roommate to meet you at the airport,and you can stay in my room.He is a very nice person and he will stay with you during the Festival!At the same time,you'll taste the Chinese traditional food--Zongzi and watch the exciting race--the Dragon Boat Races.(高分句型三) I'm sure you will have a good time.(端午节期间的安排)
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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