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14.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分.
How time flies!This is a third year that I have been in this school.In the past two years,our school had organized many activities.That impressed me most was an activity calling"Learning to Farm".In an autumn afternoon,we went to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes.Having been in the city for so a long time,we were so happy to go to the countryside.After we were divided into 3groups,we started to work.Some students cut potatoes into pieces; some dug holes,and the others put the pieces into the hole,put the earth back and pushed them down hard.We continued doing that until all the work was done.Although we were exhausted,but we felt happy on our way home.

分析 时间飞快,在学校的两年生活中,作者印象最深的是学校组织的学农活动--种土豆,同学们分工协作,尽管很累,但是很高兴.

解答 How time flies!This is a third year that I have been in this school.In the past two years,our school had organized many activities.That impressed me most was an activity calling"Learning to Farm".In an autumn afternoon,we went to a farm which we learned to plant potatoes.Having been in the city for so a long time,we were so happy to go to the countryside.After we were divided into 3groups,we started to work.Some students cut potatoes into pieces; some dug holes,and the others put the pieces into the hole,put the earth back and pushed them down hard.We continued doing that until all the work was done.Although we were exhausted,but we felt happy on our way home.
详解:
1.a 改为the,考查冠词,形容词最高级前应用定冠词the.
2.had改为 has;考查动词的时态,in the past two and a half years应与现在完成时连用.
3.That改为What;考查名词性从句,这是一个主语从句,疑问代词what在从句中作主语.
4.calling改为called;考查分词作定语,activity与动词call存在逻辑上的动宾关系,故用过去分词形式作后置定语.
5.In 改为on;考查介词,在具体到某一天的下午时,应使用介词on.
6.which改为where或者前面加on考查定语从句,关系词指代先行词farm,在从句中作状语所以用where或on which.
7.so 改为such;考查固定结构,so+形容词+a+名词,such+a+形容词+名词.
8.hole改为holes;考查名词单复数,根据上文的some dug holes,可知此处要用复数形式holes.
9.them改为it,考查代词,it在这里代替上文的不可数名词the earth.
10.去掉but,考查连词,在英语中although可与yet,still连用,但不与but连用,although用在句首,所以去掉but.

点评 短文改错首先要通读短文,把握中心思想,再结合上下文的语境充分运用基础知识,从句型结构,固定搭配,词的变化等多方面进行分析判断,找出错误加以修改

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