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3．假如你是Mike，你的好友Tom因两次考试成绩不理想而感到很烦恼，发来e-mail向你倾诉．请根据下列内容写一封e-mail作为回复．
1．不必沮丧，认真分析（analyze）失败原因．
2．增强自信心，避免犯同样的错误．
3．失败是成功之母，只要努力不放 弃，迟早会成功的．
注意：1．适当增加细节；2．不要逐字翻译；3．词数100左右．
Dear Tom，
    I have received your e-mail and know that you are in a bad mood now．
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Best wishes and good luck．
                                            Yours，
                                             Mike．

Answer 1

分析 1．本文属于书信，也是提纲类作文的一种．2．审题后可知：短文要点已经给出，可依据题目给出的三个要点分三段写作，这部分可适当应用祈使句表达，也可用宾语从句表达自己的观点或给出建议．短文应第一、二人称适当变化．3．可以使用谚语"As we all know，failure is the mother of success．"以增加作文亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
祈使句以动词原形开头：做某事Do sth．；不要做某事 Don't do sth．；沮丧 lose heart；相信自己 believe in yourself；成功 success；失败 failure；放弃 give up；迟早 sonner or later
You see，we will face many more exams in the future even if we leave school．（高分句型一）
Correct the mistakes you made in the exams or in the exercises you did before，and find out why you made such mistakes．（高分句型二）
 As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Tom，
        I've received your e-mail and know that you are in a bad mood now．However，I don't think it necessary for you to be so disappointed for failing twice．You see，we will face many more exams in the future even if we leave school．（高分句型一） So try the following：
        Correct the mistakes you made in the exams or in the exercises you did before，and find out why you made such mistakes．（高分句型二）Try to avoid making them again in the next exams．Prepare for any exam and believe in yourself．
        As we all know，failure is the mother of success．（高分句型三）Let every failure be your stepping stone．If you try your best and never give up，you are sure to succeed sooner or later．
        Best wishes and good luck．
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Mike．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．