Question

2．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
最近许多城市常被雾霾（haze）所笼罩，请就这一话题谈谈你的看法．文章必须包括：
1．描述雾霾天气的景象
2．提出解决这一问题的建议．
Recently，haze weather has become a daily one right here in large part of China．People are forced to wear the mask to avoid breathing poisonous air．Haze is air pollution in which is mixed up with dust，smoke and other dry particles，and it obscure the clarity of the sky and interacts with the natural environment．
This kind of air pollutant come from a variety of natural and manmade sources．Natural sources can include windblown dust，and soot from wildfires．Manmade sources can include motor vehicles，and industrial fuel burning，and manufacturing operations．The one of the main cause that touches off haze is manufacturing operations．Many factories were over measure produced the smog that had over the standard and the smog seriously influence the air become air pollution．
To settle this problem，a series of meaures should be taken as follows．First，we should strengthen air monitor to lower the levels of small particulate pollutants．Second，we should enact more strict laws and regulations and keep perfecting our current law on environmental protection to regulate people's daily action and the industrial production and punish those factories that ignore the protection and keep emitting dangerous material that cause haze．Third，we should develop green and energy-saving energy to lower the emission of haze and improve air quality．As far as i am concerned，if we work together to be able to do such measures，our environment will getting better and better and haze weather will vanish completely．．

Answer 1

分析 考查开放性短文写作．本文的话题是雾霾；在描述雾霾情景的时候，可以从能见度，空气污染指数等方面展开．分析原因从污染源的排放，汽车尾气不达标以及PM2.5等具体数据．在建议方面，主要从教育人们主要环境保护，减少排放等方面做具体说明．本文给考生自由发挥的余地较大．
高分句型一：
Haze is air pollution in which is mixed up with dust，smoke and other dry particles，and it obscure the clarity of the sky and interacts with the natural environment．
雾霾是空气污染和尘埃混合起来，烟雾和其他干颗粒，它模糊的清晰的天空和与自然环境．
高分句型二：
Many factories were over measure produced the smog that had over the standard and the smog seriously influence the air become air pollution．
许多工厂过度测量产生的烟雾超过标准，烟雾严重影响空气成为空气污染．

解答 Recently，haze weather has become a daily one right here in large part of China．People are forced to wear the mask to avoid breathing poisonous air．Haze is air pollution in which is mixed up with dust，smoke and other dry particles，and it obscure the clarity of the sky and interacts with the natural environment（高分句型一）．
  This kind of air pollutant come from a variety of natural and manmade sources．Natural sources can include windblown dust，and soot from wildfires．Manmade sources can include motor vehicles，and industrial fuel burning，and manufacturing operations．The one of the main cause that touches off haze is manufacturing operations．Many factories were over measure produced the smog that had over the standard and the smog seriously influence the air become air pollution（高分句型二）．
  To settle this problem，a series of meaures should be taken as follows．First，we should strengthen air monitor to lower the levels of small particulate pollutants．Second，we should enact more strict laws and regulations and keep perfecting our current law on environmental protection to regulate people's daily action and the industrial production and punish those factories that ignore the protection and keep emitting dangerous material that cause haze．Third，we should develop green and energy-saving energy to lower the emission of haze and improve air quality．As far as i am concerned，if we work together to be able to do such measures，our environment will getting better and better and haze weather will vanish completely．

点评 开放性作文只给出了一个话题，给考生自由发挥的余地很大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．