题目内容
【题目】书面表达
请根据以下信息,介绍一位传奇人物。
姓 名:Marie Curie (Madame Curie)
出生日期:1867年11月7日
出 生 地:波兰一个知识分子家庭
兴趣爱好:自幼对物理及阅读兴趣很浓。
性格特征:意志坚强,有决心。
人生态度:弱者等待时机,强者创造时机。
主要成就:发现镭,获得诺贝尔奖。
评价:对科学界做出巨大贡献,被认为是最伟大的女性科学家。
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【答案】
Born into an intellectual family in Poland on Nov.7, 1867, Marie Curie, also known as Madame Curie, showed great interest in physics when she was young. Because of having no chance of being admitted to a university in Poland as a woman at that time, she went to France for further studies and received a degree in physics. In addition, Madame Curie held such an attitude towards life that the weak wait for opportunities while the strong create them. With strong will and great determination, Madame Curie achieved great success in discovering radium, which enabled her to win the Nobel Prize. Not only did she make great contributions to the world of science but she is regarded as the greatest woman scientist owing to what she did.
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