Question

5．随着社会和经济的发展，人类的活动越来越多，很多动植物濒临灭绝．请你根据以下提示，以"Wildlife Protection"为题写一篇120词左右的文章，说明如何保护濒危野生动植物．

原因	1、栖息地破坏 2、食物短缺 3、过度猎杀     …
如何保护	1、保护环境 2、建立保护区 3、禁止捕杀    …
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Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文，要求以"Wildlife Protection"为题写一篇120词左右的文章，说明如何保护濒危野生动植物．我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．要点已经很具体，考生需要进行准确表达．别忘了发表自己的观点，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．So we should first raise people's awareness ofprotecting the environment and not buying products of endangered species because when the buying stops，the killing can，too．这句话用了并列句，原因状语从句，时间状语从句，要求考生有很强的驾驭能力

解答     With the development of society and economy，many animals have disappeared during the long history of the earth and many more are in danger of extinction for many reasons．Above all，their habitat is threatened，resulting ina lack of food．Besides，they are being hunted without mercy．
As we know，animals are our friends．To protect them is to protect ourselves．So we should first raise people's awareness ofprotecting the environment and not buying products of endangered species because when the buying stops，the killing can，too．Second，we can collect money to help protect wildlife and build reserves．As for the government，it should pass laws toprevent endangered animals from being hunted．
In a word，human beings should learn to live in peace with wildlife．If everyone makes a little contribution，it will make a big differencefor wild animals．Let's take action right now．

点评 本文提纲类作文．动笔前一定要先认真审题，明确要点内容，不能遗漏要点，也不能跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇的积累以外，还有多分析范文，学习范文中的优点．