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6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文．短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last weekend，after pay a visit to the city of New York，I visited the Smithsonian Institutions National Air and Space Museum，where lies in Washington，D．C．
The museum，which covers a area of 18，000 square meters，is made of 24 exhibition halls．All kinds of planes，rockets，missiles and spaceship of great importance and variously old instruments that famous pilots and astronauts used are on display．In addition，I see copies of some satellites and aircraft．More interestingly，I tried operating on some aircraft by myself．During the visit，I took lots of pictures as well．
This brief visit helped myself learn much about the history of human's space exploration．It made me more interesting in science and technology．

分析 本文主要讲述作者参观了太空博物馆．看到了各种各样的飞机，火箭，导弹和太空飞船等．此外，作者还亲自操作了航空器．简短的参观帮助作者更多地了解了人类探索太空的历史．

解答 Last weekend，after pay a visit to the city of New York，I visited the Smithsonian Institutions National Air and Space Museum，where lies in Washington，D．C．
The museum，which covers a area of 18，000 square meters，is made∧of 24 exhibition halls．All kinds of planes，rockets，missiles and spaceship of great importance and variously old instruments that famous pilots and astronauts used are on display．In addition，I see copies of some satellites and aircraft．More interestingly，I tried operating on some aircraft by myself．During the visit，I took lots of pictures as well．
This brief visit helped myself learn much about the history of human's space exploration．It made me more interesting in science and technology．
详解：
1．pay改为paying 考查动名词．after是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
2．where改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词Space Museum在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．
3．a改为an 考查冠词．area是可数名词，单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指，因其读音以发元音开头，用不定冠词an．
4．加up 考查固定搭配．be made up of意为"由…组成"，是固定搭配．
5．spaceship改为spaceships 考查名词复数．spaceship是可数名词，此处表示不止一艘，用复数形式．
6．variously改为various 考查形容词．instruments是名词，要用形容词修饰．
7．see改为saw 考查动词时态．全文讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
8．去掉on 考查词语用法．operate作"操作"讲时是及物动词，后接宾语时不需要介词．
9．myself改为me 考查代词．根据句意：简短的参观帮助我更多地了解了人类探索太空的历史．用代词me．
10．interesting改为interested 考查过去分词．be interested in意为"对…感兴趣"，此处是过去分词短语interested inscience and technology作宾语补足语．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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