题目内容
17.好的心情可以使我们感到愉快、幸福.但是怎样才能保持一个好的心情呢?请你根据以下提示,以 How to keep a good mood 为题用英语写一篇短文:1.保持健康;
2.好好休息;
3.回忆过去令自己高兴的事情;
4.多考虑事情的积极方面.
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
参考词汇:回忆recall 积极方面 the positive aspect
How to keep a good mood
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Best wishes,
Li Hua.
分析 本文属于提纲作文,动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,跑题偏题.对于本篇写作中的2.好好休息;3.回忆过去令自己高兴的事情;4.多考虑事情的积极方面;这三个要点可以放在一个问题之下阐述出来,那就是如何保持健康.为了能够写好作文,平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.
亮点句型一:It's known to us that a weak body always has a negative effect on our mood.我们都知道虚弱的身体总是对我们的情绪有负面影响.本句中it是形式主语,
that a weak body always has a negative effect on our mood是一个主语从句.
亮点句型二:we had better have a good rest,which plays a very important role in maintaining our mental health.我们最好好好休息,这对维持我们的心理健康起着非常重要的作用.本句是一个非限制性定语从句,which指代主句的内容.
亮点句型三:Only by doing these can we keep a good mood.只有这样做我们才能保持好心情.这是一个only引导的方式状语置于句首,主句做部分倒装的倒装句.
解答 How to keep a good mood
A good mood makes us comfortable and happy.However,it's not easy to keep a good mood especially when we‘re faced with trouble.Then,how can we keep a good mood?
To begin with,we should keep healthy.It's known to us that a weak body always has a negative effect on our mood.(亮点句型一)Secondly,we had better have a good rest,which plays a very important role in maintaining our mental health.(亮点句型二)Thirdly,it's of great benefit to recall those which make us happy.Memories of those things contribute to a good mood.Lastly,think the positive aspect of everything; don't live a life full of worries.Only by doing these can we keep a good mood.(亮点句型三)
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
"What are you doing at home?"I asked casually.
"Andrew,I was (31)Ctoday,"he answered quietly.
I was sure he was joking."No,you weren't.Why are you (32)B at home?"
Then I noticed his (33)D and realized he was telling me the truth.My father has always been a hard worker and prided himself on his career.(34)A our family has been his joy,and I guess I have (35)B his work for granted.
My father's unemployment (36)Bmany changes in our lives.For starters,he was at home all the time,which meant my bed had to be(37)A,my room cleaned up,and my (38)B done right after school.I would come home every day to find him at the computer (39)D jobs.I began to notice how (40)A he seemed,and how losing his job affected his self-esteem,though he tried to be (41)B.For the first time,I(42)A my dad as vulnerable (易受伤的).He asked my brother and me to (43)Cless.I gave up my pocket money,(44)C it wasn't much.I felt I was doing the right.I also found a part-time job.
After several difficult months of searching,my dad(45)Bto go in a totally different direction.He (46)C that he never wanted to be laid off again,so he was going to start his own business.Day by day,I watched him (47)D it,and I admired how much time and (48)Dhe expended.I (49)C knew he was a hard worker,but watching him in action really affected me.
Although this was one of the (50)A experiences for our family,it taught me a lot about dealing with adversity (逆境),and will be my foundations for success.
31.A.taken off | B.put off | C.laid off | D.called off |
32.A.eventually | B.really | C.frequently | D.especially |
33.A.happiness | B.kindness | C.loneliness | D.seriousness |
34.A.Supporting | B.Abusing | C.Offering | D.Shooting |
35.A.regarded | B.taken | C.viewed | D.looked |
36.A.came out | B.brought about | C.gave off | D.let out |
37.A.made | B.sold | C.banned | D.applied |
38.A.job | B.homework | C.fun | D.time |
39.A.falling into | B.putting up | C.keeping on | D.searching for |
40.A.down | B.flexible | C.concrete | D.honest |
41.A.disappointed | B.optimistic | C.anxious | D.appropriate |
42.A.considered | B.remembered | C.rejected | D.predicted |
43.A.earn | B.enjoy | C.spend | D.find |
44.A.even so | B.if only | C.even though | D.as if |
45.A.hoped | B.decided | C.dreamed | D.expected |
46.A.advised | B.informed | C.explained | D.insisted |
47.A.form | B.open | C.set | D.build |
48.A.strength | B.power | C.force | D.energy |
49.A.never | B.seldom | C.always | D.hardly |
50.A.worst | B.best | C.most | D.least |
问题 | 城市交通拥挤 | |
解决方案(一) 建造更多道路 | 优点 | 降低街道拥挤程度;加速车流 |
缺点 | 占地过多 | |
解决方案(二) 开辟更多公共汽车线路 | 优点 | 减少自行车和汽车的数量 |
缺点 | 对部分人可能造成不便 | |
你的看法 | (请考生联系自己拟定内容,列举两至三点.) |
2)词数:150字左右.短文开头已为你写好,不计入词数.
参考词汇:
1.拥堵-congestion
How to Solve the Problem of Heavy Traffic?
With the development of economy,more and more vehicles are going on the streets.