题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华。你的好友李涛说高三学习压力太大,他有点担心自己坚持不住。请你用英语给他写一篇短信,内容包括:
1.坚持(perseverance)的重要性;
2.举例说明;
3.你的想法。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节.,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好。
Dear Li Tao,
How are you? It's unnecessary for you to worry about anything. _______________
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Your,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Li Tao,
How are you? It's unnecessary for you to worry about anything. The only thing we can do is to study hard. Perseverance is what it takes to achieve one’s success. Without perseverance, one can’t realize his dream. Only by sticking to what we’re seeking and again can we make it at last.
There are lots of examples about a person’s perseverance bringing about changes in history or new discoveries in cures for some human diseases. Take Tu Youyou for example. After many years perseverance, she became the Chinese citizen to win a Nobel Prize in science at the age of 84, which made all Chinese proud.
So, never give up easily. Hold on to our dream and we’ll succeed.
【解析】
试题分析:本文是提纲类作文,要点已给出。写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。
亮点说明:本文是一篇英文书信,格式正确,要点齐全,句子衔接紧密,布局合理。It's unnecessary for you to worry about anything.动词不定式作真正主语;The only thing we can do is to study hard.定语从句和动词不定式作表语在句中完美结合;Only by sticking to what we’re seeking and again can we make it at last.部分倒装的运用堪称经典;she became the Chinese citizen to win a Nobel Prize in science at the age of 84,which made all Chinese proud.非限制性定语从句用在句中;Hold on to our dream and we’ll succeed.“祈使句+and/or +表示将来的陈述句”的运用巧妙至极。