题目内容
【题目】下面是刊登在《中国日报》上的一则关于招聘销售经理的英文广告。请仔细阅读这则广告,写一篇150词左右的求职信。
We are looking for a person to fill in the position of Sales Manager.
Requirements:
College graduate majoring in Marketing Management.
Some experience in the marketing field.
Outgoing personality.
Able to communicate with people of different levels and communication skills in both English and Chinese.
Good knowledge in PC operation.
Interested in it, please contact Mr.Johnson at Johnson @sina.com.
注意:
1.使用恰当的人称;
2.内容要点可用不同方式表达;
3.紧扣主题,可适当发挥。
Dear Mr.Johnson,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Mr. Johnson,
I'm writing to respond to your advertisement for the position of Sales Manager.
I will graduate from Peking University in the coming July, majoring in Marketing Management. I have ever worked for half a year in the marketing field as an intern in a computer company. I'm outgoing and good at communicating with people from all walks of life both in fluent English and Chinese. Besides, I am skilled in operating computers. I believe my solid educational experience and practical work experience can make me fit for this position.
I'll appreciate it if you can give me a chance for an interview and we can discuss this position further. I can be reached at 01012345678. I'm looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Li Ming
【解析】试题分析:本文是要求写一封求职信应聘一份销售经理的工作。工作要求以及联系方式都在题干中给出。成文时应注意以下几点:(1)内容要点齐全。你适合这份工作的优势是重点内容,要详细阐述。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态:一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点,列出提纲:第一部分:写作目的(应聘工作);第二段:介绍本人情况,重点说明有能力做好这份工作;第三段:表达自己的希望(希望得到这个机会)。
【亮点说明】
1. 使用高级句型:现在分词majoring做状语I will graduate from Peking University in the coming July, majoring in Marketing Management.;宾语从句的使用.I believe my solid educational experience and practical work experience can make me fit for this position.;形式宾语it后接宾语从句的句子I'll appreciate it if you can give me a chance for an interview and we can discuss this position further.。2. 使用了过渡词语:Besides等。3.使用了重要短语:graduate from毕业于;good at擅长;fit for适合,适于;look forward to期待;hear from收到来信。