Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你所喜爱的Global Mirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见．请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：

1．说明你是该报的忠实读者

2．赞赏该报优点：

1)兼顾国内外新闻

2)介绍名人成功故事

3．提出建议：

刊登指导英语学习的文章

注意：

1．词数100左右，开头语己为你写好；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Editor-in-Chief,

Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror!

I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I like it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.

As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning , and I hope that it will become even more popular.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于记叙文，根据提示信息完成一封信。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week.，本句中包含了so that 引导的结果状语从句，又包含了that引导的定语从句。Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me understand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place.本句中用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，又用了how a person can work hard to make the world a better place充当宾语的宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语by doing both …and …等，以及副词first用于引出所要写明的内容。