Question

9．假设你是李华，作为一名交换生在美国学习．近期，关爱儿童协会将在学校举办一场给残疾儿童捐书的活动，请以该协会志愿者的身份，给学校的老师Peter 写一封信，诚邀他参加捐书活动．
主要内容：
1．自我介绍；
2．关爱儿童协会的简要介绍（非营利性组织，已为1200名儿童提供住所）；
3．活动时间：10月25日 早上8点钟；
4．活动地点：米尔顿高中（Milton  Academy）的操场上．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
I am writing the letter to 
                                              
Yours，
Li   Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息作为一名交换生在美国学习．近期，关爱儿童协会将在学校举办一场给残疾儿童捐书的活动，请以该协会志愿者的身份，给学校的老师Peter 写一封信，诚邀他参加捐书活动，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：自我介绍；关爱儿童协会的简要介绍（非营利性组织，已为1200名儿童提供住所）；活动时间：10月25日 早上8点钟；活动地点：米尔顿高中（Milton  Academy）的操场上． 2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态； 4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：take part in参加；take care of照顾；take a further step更进一步；Look forward to盼望；
I am a volunteer of Kid Care Association，a non-profit organization which has been actively working to provide care and shelter for all the disabled children in our community．（高分句型一）
We are taking care of their daily needs by providing them with foods，medicines and some books to read just for their recreation．（高分句型二）
Your help will mean a lot to us and help the project take a further step．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       I am writing the letter to invite you to take part in a meaningful activity about donating free books to the disabled children．My name is Li Hua．I am a volunteer of Kid Care Association，a non-profit organization which has been actively working to provide care and shelter for all the disabled children in our community．（高分句型一）We have provided shelter for 1，200disabdled children．We are taking care of their daily needs by providing them with foods，medicines and some books to read just for their recreation．（高分句型二）The activity will be held on the playground of Milton Academy at 8 o'clock on the morning of October 25^th．I sincerely request you to help us．Your help will mean a lot to us and help the project take a further step．（高分句型三）
       Look forward to your reply!
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                   Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．