题目内容
假定你是李华,正在美国的阿肯色州中部城市Little Rock 读书,想在这个暑假里找一份饭店服务员的工作。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请你给联系人写一封信,询问相关情况。信中需说明你的问题(广告下方已列出)。
Server Wanted
Contact: Joseph Smith
City: Little Rock
Post Code: 72223
Posted in: Little Rock Restaurant Jobs
JOB PURPOSE: The primary purpose of this position is to create a unique and personal experience for Buffalo Wild Wings’ guests by effectively presenting food and drink options in a friendly and enthusiastic manner.
Your questions:
1. Height and age limitation?
2. Working experience?
3. Spare-time or full-time?
4. Days per week?
5. Pay?
注意:1. 词数120左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连续。
参考词汇:服务员;侍者 server
One possible version:
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student studying in Little Rock. I happened to read your ad for a sever in a newspaper and I am interested in it. But I still have a few questions about it, so I am writing the letter to you.
Firstly, I am a boy of 17, and I am not sure whether you have special requirements about height and age. Secondly, I have no working experience, for I am just a high school student. Thirdly, I wonder whether it is a spare-time job or a full-time one. In addition, I am eager to know how many days I’ll work per week and how much the pay is.
I am looking forward to your early reply. (120 words)
Best Wishes
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是一篇书信体裁的书面表达,首先要注意书信的格式,而且书信的语言要简洁明了,开门见山提出写信的目的。根据提示内容可知文章要包括要询问的五个方面,也就是五个要点,即工作有没有限制;是否需要工作经验;是兼职工作还是全职;每周工作的天数和薪水等问题。此外,文章要使用一般现在时,使用第一人称。写信时语言要自然流畅,礼貌委婉,在内容方面可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。为了提高档次还要注意句式的变换。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达格式正确,要点全面,语言自然流畅。首先作者开门见山说明自己对工作感兴趣,用But I still have a few questions about it, so I am writing the letter to you作为过渡提出自己关心的问题,在表述时使.用了firstly,secondly,thirdly和in addition等连接词,这样使文章内容很有层次性。同时,作者还使用了并列句I am a boy of 17, and I am not sure whether you have special requirements about height and age和I have no working experience,for I am just a high school student.宾语从句I wonder whether it is a spare-time job or a full-time one.等多种表达方式,增加了文章的亮点。
考点:考查提纲作文