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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As a father sat reading a magazine, his young daughter kept disturb him. To keep her busily, he tore out a page on that a map of the world was printed. He cut it into piece and asked her to put them together again by her own.

He was sure she will need the whole day to get it done. But a few minutes later the girl returned with a perfect map. When asked whether she did it so quickly, she said, “There’s a man’s face on other side. I just made the face perfect to get the map right.” She then ran out of to play, leaving the father surprising.

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【解析】

这是一篇记叙文。记叙了一位父亲因为不想小女儿一直打扰看杂志，于是从印着世界地图的纸上撕下了一页让女儿去拼图。结果女儿用另一种令人吃惊的方式快速完成了拼图的故事。

1.考查非谓语动词。句意：一位父亲坐在那里看杂志，他的小女儿不停地打扰他。keep doing sth.“持续做某事”后跟-ing形式，故disturb改为disturbing。

2.考查形容词。句意：为了让她忙个不停，他在那张印着世界地图的纸上撕下了一页。短语keep sb. busy“让某人忙个不停”，故busily改为busy。

3.考查定语从句连接词。本句为“介词+关系代词”形式的定语从句修饰先行词pages，指物，且做介词on的宾语，只能用which。故that改为which。

4.考查名词的数。piece为可数名词，此处“撕成碎片”应用复数形式，故piece改为pieces。

5.考查介词。短语on one’s own“独自”，故by改为on。

6.考查时态一致。句意：He was sure she will need the whole day to get it done.根据上文主句He was sure为一般过去时，从句要与主句时态保持一致，故will改为would，为过去将来时。

7.考查连接词。句意：当被问及她是如何这么快做到的时候。此处缺少方式状语，故whether改为how。

8.考查冠词。此处表示特指“地图的另一面”，故other前添加冠词the。

9考查介词。句意：然后她跑出去玩耍了。run out of“用光；用尽”与句意不符，故去掉of。

10.考查形容词。father指人，应用-ed结尾的形容词修饰，故surprising改为surprised。