Question

19．假设你是李华，你和好朋友Lily约好上周六一起去书店（bookstore）．但是，你因故没能赴约，请根据以下要点给她发一封email．
内容包括：1．真诚道歉；  2．说明原因； 3．弥补措施．
注意：
1．时态的运用    2．词数100左右
3．开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）   4．请在答题卡上作答．
Dear Lily，
I am very sorry that                                       
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 题目要求写一封邮件，就不能如约一起去书向Bob道歉，使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作．写作内容包括：表示歉意；说明原因；弥补措施，另约时间．注意使用连接词，使作文内容连贯．
亮点说明：范文包括了所有要点内容，做到了语意连贯．范文使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon和the change will not cause you too much trouble；目的状语从句so that we'll have more time to read and select books；条件句If it's convenient for you；省略句If not等，长短句结合，使内容更加丰富．

解答 Dear Lily，
      I'm sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon．I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon．（高分句型一）I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble．
     Shall we go on Saturday morning？We can set out early so that we'll have more time to read and select books．If it's convenient for you，let's meet at 8：30 outside the school gate．（高分句型二）If not，let me know what time suits you best．I should be available any time after school next week．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．