Question

【题目】假设你是校英语报的记者，请你根据以下信息，写一篇新闻报道：昨日夜间本市遭遇特大暴雨袭击，导致西村附近发生泥石流灾害，造成一人死亡，五人失踪；灾情发生后，一些村民同官兵一起积极参与搜救；此次灾害造成直接经济损失约一千多万元。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：泥石流 mudslide

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Answer 1

【答案】A very terrible rainstorm hit our city last night and caused huge mudslides around West Village. In

this disaster, nearly ten houses were destroyed and an office building was ruined. What’s worse, it has already caused one death, leaving five persons missing.

When trouble happens at a place, help comes from all sides. Soldiers were sent to help out. And a lot of villagers tried their best to help search for the missing persons. It is said that the direct economic loss caused by this heavy rainstorm is more than ten million yuan. Through everyone’s efforts, everything went on very well.

【解析】

本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇新闻报道。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一篇新闻报道：假设你是校英语报的记者，请你根据以下信息，写一篇新闻报道：昨日夜间本市遭遇特大暴雨袭击，导致西村附近发生泥石流灾害，造成一人死亡，五人失踪；灾情发生后，一些村民同官兵一起积极参与搜救；此次灾害造成直接经济损失约一千多万元。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：Mudslide（泥石流）；five persons missing.（五个人丢失）；Through everyone’s efforts（通过每个人的努力）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。