Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你的笔友Peter是一名来自加拿大的留学生，他发现学习汉语很难，为此他非常苦。根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他一些学习汉语的方法。

● 加入中文俱乐部：

● 多读汉语；

● 多说汉语，不要怕犯错误。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 电子邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

I hope you will have fun learning Chinese. Good luck!

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Li hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I'm sorry to hear that you find Chinese learning difficult and that you are worried about it. Here is my advice.

First, you can join the Chinese club in your school, where you can practice speaking to Chinese people. It is very helpful. Second, read Chinese aloud every day. It is a good way for you to improve your pronunciation, you will find Chinese very interesting. Third, speak Chinese in your daily life as much as possible. You can speak Chinese to your friends, your teachers or your classmates. Don't be afraid of making mistakes.

I hope you will have fun learning Chinese. Good luck!

Li hua

【解析】试题分析：

本文是给作者的留学生笔友Peter回封邮件，给他一些关于汉语学习的建议。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。说明汉语学习的特点，给他一些可行的建议。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。根据题目的要求和我们上面提到的注意点，列出提纲：第一部分：写作背景（Peter发邮件说，他正在学汉语，但感觉很吃力）；第二段：可行性的建议（用First，Second，Third使这一段流畅） ；第三段：表示期望（希望Peter进步，发现学习汉语有趣）。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：动词hear后接两个宾语从句I'm sorry to hear that you find Chinese learning difficult and that you are worried about it.；使用非限制性定语从句First, you can join the Chinese club in your school, where you can practice speaking Chinese people.；it作形式主语It is a good way for you to improve your pronunciation； 2.使用了过渡词语：First，Second，Third 等。3.使用了重要短语：be worried about担心；be afraid of害怕；make mistakes犯错。