题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,请你根据以下要点,写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。
内容要点: 1.时间:请假3天,从下星期一到星期三;
2.理由:父亲生病,去照顾 ;
3.承诺:返校后,尽快将落下的功课补上,努力赶上其他同学。
注意:1. 词数:100左右;
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
请假:apply /ask for leave补课:make up
Dear Miss Morgan,
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Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Miss Morgan,
I’m sorry to apply for three day’s leave from the next Monday to Thursday. As my father is badly ill now in hospital. I have to go to see him and take care of him for a few days.
As for the missed lessons during my absence, I will do my best to make up them as soon as I come back to school. And I promise to work hard and try to catch up with others .
I will be much thankful if you approve my application.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,假设你是李华,请你根据以下要点,写一封短信向Miss Morgan请假。内容要点: 1.时间:请假3天,从下星期一到星期三;2.理由:父亲生病,去照顾;3.承诺:返校后,尽快将落下的功课补上,努力赶上其他同学。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):apply /ask for leave (请假);take care of (照顾);absence (缺席);do my best (竭尽全力);make up (补课)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时和一般将来时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。