题目内容

11.文中共有10处错误,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜钱(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Dear Jim,
I am so exciting that you will come to China.I will free from December 18and will have a plenty of time to be together with you.I'll meet you at the airport and then you will take Bus No.8 for my home.You worry about the weather here in your email.In fact,the weather here is quite different from it in your city.It isn't very cold,but you needn't bring many clothes with you.During your stay here,I'll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks.I am sure we will have greatly fun together.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
John.

分析 本文主要讲述John给Jim写信,告诉他到中国的相关注意事项.比如,John所在的地方不是很冷,要Jim不要带太多的衣服.在留在中国期间,可以参观名胜古迹,还可以品尝一些本地小吃等.

解答 Dear Jim,
I am so exciting that you will come to China.I will∧free from December 18 and will have plenty of time to be together with you.I'll meet you at the airport and then you will take Bus No.8 for my home.You worry about the weather here in your email.In fact,the weather here is quite different from it in your city.It isn't very cold,but you needn't bring many clothes with you.During your stay here,I'll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks.I am sure we will have greatly fun together.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
John.
1.exciting改为excited  考查过去分词.过去分词作表语,多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化,其主语多半是人.
2.free前加be 考查句子结构. free此处是形容词,will后应加be,构成系表结构.
3.去掉a  考查冠词.plenty of意为"很多",是固定搭配.
4.you改为we  考查代词.根据句意:前文是I,碰头见面一起去,you应改为we.
5.for改为to 考查介词.根据句意,然后我们乘八路公共汽车到我家.用介词to.
6.worry改为worried 考查动词时态.由于本句讲述的是过去的事情,故要动词要用过去式.
7.it改为that 考查代词.根据句意:这里的天气跟你所在的城市的(天气)是不同的.为避免重复用that指代weather.
8.but改为so/and 考查连词.前后两句的逻辑关系是并列或因果关系,用连词so/and.
9.interests改为interest 考查名词.在英语中,places of interest 是固定搭配,意为"名胜古迹".而这个词组的复数形式应该在place后加s.
10.greatly改为great 考查形容词.fun是名词,其前面要用形容词修饰.

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.

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