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19.假定英语课课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
My grandpa used to be a teacher who is retired now.he has been living the busy and active life,going online,writing articles for newspapers,but attending academic conferences all over the country.He also had many bobbies,such as growing flowers at home,collecting stamps and coins,and especial drinking tea.There are various tea sets and almost all kinds tea in his home,most of that I can't name.
My grandpa is so very crazy about tea that he can't live with enjoying tea several times a day.He once told me he would be sleepy without tea.I often help making tea and drink together with me.I love my grandpa.

分析 本文主要讲述作者爷爷过着忙碌和积极的生活,上网,为报纸写稿,出席学术会议.也有许多爱好,如种花,集邮和钱币,特别是饮茶.因此,作者时常帮着沏茶和他一起饮茶.

解答 My grandpa used to be a teacher who is retired now.he has been living the busy and active life,going online,writing articles for newspapers,but attending academic conferences all over the country.He also had many bobbies,such as growing flowers at home,collecting stamps and coins,and especial drinking tea.There are various tea sets and almost all kinds∧tea in his home,most of that I can't name.
My grandpa is so very crazy about tea that he can't live with enjoying tea several times a day.He once told me he would be sleepy without tea.I often help making tea and drink together with me.I love my grandpa.
详解:
1.the改为a 考查冠词.live a life意为"过日子",是固定搭配.
2.but改为and/or 考查连词.going online,writing articles for newspapers和attending academic conferences all over the country是现在分词短语作状语,是并列关系或选择关系,用连词and/or.
3.had改为has 考查动词时态.此处讲述的是一般事实,用一般现在时态.
4.especial改为especially 考查副词.attend是动词,要用副词修饰.
5.加of 考查固定搭配.all kinds of意为"各种各类的",是固定搭配.
6 that改为which 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词various tea sets and almost all kinds of tea在从句中作介词of的宾语,用关系代词which,介词后不接关系代词that.
7.去掉very 考查副词.so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…",句型中的so是副词,常常用来修饰形容词或副词,常用句型为:主语+谓语+so+adj./adv.+that从句.已有副词so修饰crazy,very是多余的,要去掉.
8.with改为without 考查介词.根据句意:每天他不喝几次茶不能活.用介词without.
9.making改为make 考查动词不定式.help do sth.意为"帮助做某事",help后接不带to的动词不定式.
10.me改为him 考查代词.根据句意:我时常帮着沏茶和他一起饮茶.用代词him.

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.

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