Question

【题目】假如你叫李平，你的美国网友Brian想了解你的家乡成都的情况。请你根据提示给他写一封回信。

1. 所在位置：中国西南

2. 主要特点：历史悠久；熊猫故乡；美食之都。

3. 现代城市：高楼大厦，购物中心林立；各种交通方式都很方便，近年来共开通了4条地铁线路。

4. 闲适的生活方式给所有来访者留下深刻印象。

注意：

1. 词数100词左右，书信的开头结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

2. 不要逐字翻译，表达清楚要点即可。

3. 需适当增加连接词使行文连贯。

Dear Brian,

I’m glad you’re interested to know something about my hometown Chengdu.

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I do hope that some day you’ll come to visit this city.

Yours truly,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Brian,

I’m glad you’re interested to know something about my hometown Chengdu. And I’m now making a brief introduction about it.

Located in the southwest of China, Chengdu is a city with a long history. It is the home to the pandas and also famous for its delicious food and snacks. Meanwhile, Chengdu is a modern city with a number of high-rise buildings and big shopping malls. As for traffic, there’re all means of transportation which are efficient and convenient. In recent years, 4 subway lines have been in use. The lifestyle here is relaxing and comfortable, which has left a deep impression on all the visitors.

I do hope that some day you’ll come to visit this city.

Yours truly,

Li Ping

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当添加细节以使行文连贯；注意选择正确的时态和人称；适当使用高级词汇和高级句型提升文章档次。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语书信，格式正确，结构严谨，语言精练，运用高级句子。I’m glad you’re interested to know something about my hometown Chengdu.使用宾语从句；Located in the southwest of China, Chengdu is a city with a long history.过去分词短语作状语；there’re all means of transportation which are efficient and convenient.限制性定语从句用在句中；The lifestyle here is relaxing and comfortable, which has left a deep impression on all the visitors.非限制性定语从句运用巧妙；I do hope that some day you’ll come to visit this city.强调谓语堪称经典；另外，Meanwhile, As for traffic, In recent years,的运用为文章增色添彩。