Question

【题目】近年来，随着清明节(the Tomb-sweeping Festival)、端午节(the Dragon Boat Festival)、中秋节(Mid-Autumn Day)等传统节日成为法定假日越来越多的人选择“自驾游(self-driving travel)”作为假期出游的首选。

请你根据以下提示，以“My Views on Self-driving Travel”为题写一篇短文：

1.自驾游增加的原因（至少两条）；

2.自驾游的优势及缺点；

3.自驾游的注意事项；

注意： 词数100--120；

可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

My Views on Self-driving Travel

Recently, as traditional Chinese festivals, such as the Tomb-sweeping Festival, the Dragon Boat Festival and the Mid-Autumn Day become official holidays, self-driving travel has become people’s preference in traveling.

The reasons why more and more people choose it are as follows. On the one hand, the economic development has made it possible for more people to buy their own private cars. On the other hand, health-conscious people focus more on the quality of their life, so they will grasp every chance to enjoy their life.

As every coin has two sides, self-driving travel is not an exception. While providing people with more chances to travel together with their family and friends, self-driving travel may also result in some problems, such as the traffic jams on the high way or even the expressway.

Since people have to drive all the way during the tour, they have to pay special attention to the safety problem and avoid driving when exhausted.

【解析】

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语such as比如；as follows如下；result in导致；On the other hand另一方面；pay special attention to注意；The reasons why more and more people choose it are as follows这个句子why引导the reason的定语从句；While providing people with more chances to travel together with their family and friends, self-driving travel may also result in some problems,这个句子providing是状语从句的省略；