Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你发现很多同学不吃早饭，经常熬夜等不健康的生活方式。学校校报的英语专栏正在开展以”健康生活方式”为主题的英文征文活动，你打算投稿。请根据以下提示的信息写一篇英语短文。

1. 指出现在部分同学生活不健康的现象；

2. 结合实际提出建议。

注意:词数100左右。

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Recently I have found that some classmates lead an unhealthy life, such as staying up late and not having breakfast. Although we are under great pressure of study in senior high school, it is necessary for us to live a healthy life. The following are some useful tips.

First, it’s important that we have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day. Second, taking regular exercise is of equal importance, which can help us to keep fit and release stress. More importantly, we should develop a positive attitude, no matter what happens. Only in this way can we keep optimistic and face any difficulties positively.

In a word, proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude can be beneficial to us. Lead a healthy life and you will encounter a better one in yourself.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文, 给报纸专栏投稿。

第一步：

审题: 投稿

人称：第三人称

时态： 一般现在时

结构： 总分法，分三部分，第一部分部分同学不健康生活方式的表现，第二部分提出具体的建议，第三部分希望大家养成健康的生活习惯。

要点：

1. 部分同学不健康生活方式的表现：熬夜，不吃早餐

2．提出具体的建议

①均衡饮食，吃早餐

②常锻炼

③保持积极的态度

3．希望大家养成健康的生活习惯

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语 ）

lead an unhealthy life；such as；stay up late；have breakfast；under great pressure；necessary；

have a balanced diet；take regular exercise；be of equal importance；keep fit；release stress；develop a positive attitude；keep optimistic；face difficulties；be beneficial to；encounter

第三步：连词成句

(1) Some classmates lead an unhealthy life.

(2) They stay up late and don’t have breakfast.

(3) It is necessary for us to live a healthy life.

(4) We should have a balanced diet and enjoy breakfast every day.

(5) It is important to take regular exercise.

(6) Taking regular exercise can help us to keep fit and release stress.

(7) We should develop a positive attitude.

(8) In this way we can keep optimistic and face any difficulties positively.

(9) Proper food, regular exercise and a positive attitude can be beneficial to us.

(10) Lead a healthy life and you will encounter a better one in yourself.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词、亮点词汇)

用such as 连接下面两个句子

(1)Some classmates lead an unhealthy life.

(2)They stay up late and don’t have breakfast.

→Some classmates lead an unhealthy life, such as staying up late and not having breakfast.

用定语从句连接下面的两个句子

(5) It is important to take regular exercise.

(6) Taking regular exercise can help us to keep fit and release stress.

→ It is important to take regular exercise, which can help us to keep fit and release stress.

用“only+状语”置于句首的倒装结构表达下面的句子

（8）In this way we can keep optimistic and face any difficulties positively.

→Only in this way can we keep optimistic and face any difficulties positively.

用if条件状语从句改写下面的句子

(10)Lead a healthy life and you will encounter a better one in yourself.

→If you lead a healthy life, you will encounter a better one in yourself.