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【题目】假如你是李华,刚获得全校英语演讲比赛一等奖。请给你的外教Jack写一封英语感谢信,内容包括:

1.表示感谢;

2.回顾准备过程中Jack对你的帮助和指导;

3.表达祝福。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯

Dear Jack,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Jack,

I am writing to tell you the good news that I have won the first prize in the English Speech Contest held in our school. I really appreciate your guidance and help.

Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest, I will never forget the help you offered to me. Not only did you correct the mistakes in my pronunciation, but you also recommended wonderful English speech videos for me to imitate. What’s more, it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident, which played a vital role in winning the contest.

Many thanks again for your great help. Wish you all the best.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假定你是李华,刚获得全校英语演讲比赛一等奖请给你的外教Jack写一封英语感谢信,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:表示感谢;回顾Jack对你的帮助和指导;宝贵经验。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。4、注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点

本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:English Speech Contest英语演讲比赛;Look back on回顾;Not only,(but)also 不仅,而且;What's more而且;

I'm writing to tell you good news that I have won the first prize in our school's English Speech Contest.(高分句型一)

Looking back on the process of preparing for the contest,I'll never forget the great progress I made with your help.(高分句型二)

What's more,it was your constant encouragement that inspired me to be confident,which played a vital role in winning the contest.(高分句型三)

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