Question

【题目】假如你是一名高中生李华，由于几年来雾霾天气越来越严重，严重地影响了人们的健康和生活，你用英语写了一篇文章向学校报刊投稿，写作内容如下

1、说明雾霾情况及危害。

2、提出应对措施。

注意：1. 上下文连贯，行文流畅。

2. 词数100左右 (开头结尾已经给出，并不计入词数)。雾霾天气the hazy weather

Dear editor

Recently, the haze weather has become a daily one right here in large part of China,______________________________________________________________________________________

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Best regards

Yours，

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor

Recently, the haze weather has become a daily one right here in large part of China,which has done great harm to our daily life.Traffic accidents and the delay of flights frequentlyhappened because of the haze weather.More and more people have to go to see the doctor because the serious disease caused by the haze. A great number of people have to stay at home to avoid the haze,even affecting students'normal classes.

In my opinion, strictmeaures on environmental protection should be taken.We should call on people to form the habit of using green product and saving energy as much as possible.What’s more, We have to do more to raise people’s awareness of environmental protection . Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days. Best regards

Yours ,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲式作文：假如你是一名高中生李华，由于几年来雾霾天气越来越严重，严重地影响了人们的健康和生活，你用英语写了一篇文章向学校报刊投稿，写作内容如下1、说明雾霾情况及危害。2、提出应对措施。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。

【亮点说明】范文用了一些常见的短语：do great harm to“对…造成伤害”，还有一些语法知识和句型：…，which has done great harm to our daily life，这句话运用了非限制性定语从句；... because the serious disease caused by the haze. 这句话用done做定语和原因状语从句，....,even affecting students'normal classes.

这句话用了doing做结果状语。文中用了in my opinion,What’s worse 等连接词，这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。