Question

【题目】人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见，请用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同意见，并表达自己的看法。

赞成的理由是：1 广交朋友；2 可自由表达思想 ；3 利于外语学习。

反对的理由 ：1 浪费时间 ；2 影响学习 ；3 可能上当受骗

你的看法是：......

注意：

1 文章必须包括以上全部内容。

2 词数100词左右。

3 参考词汇 ：网络朋友 on-line friend ，上当受骗 to be cheated .

Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays it is becoming more and more popular to make friends on-line. Different students have different opinions about it. The opinions are as follows:

Most students are for it. They think that making friends on-line has quite a few advantages. Firstly, they can make a lot of friends through it. Besides, they can express their ideas freely. Finally, they can use it to learn foreign languages well.

On the other hand, some students are against it. In their opinion, making friends on-line is a waste of time and it has a bad influence on their study. What’s worse, they may be cheated in the course of making friends on-line.

In my opinion ,it is a good thing. We can use it to make a lot of friends on line and relax ourselves .We can use it to learn English well. However, we must limit our time for it and we must be careful not to be cheated .

【解析】

试题分析：考查提纲式作文。此类作文为提纲式作文中的正反观点型议论文。通常情况下分成三部分写作：第一段写赞成的原因；第二段写反对的原因；最后一段写自己的观点及原因。需要注意的是时态和人称的问题。此类文章的时态通常为一般现在时，人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。在说明原因时，要恰当的使用连接词，使得行文更加流畅。

【亮点说明】本篇文章内容充实、结构完整。第一段，开门见山指出讨论的焦点；第二段说明支持的理由；第三段说明反对的理由；第四段说明个人的观点。整篇文章合理的使用了多种关联词，使得文章条理清晰，更具逻辑性。还使用了许多的短语，如express their ideas freely、a waste of time、has a bad influence on等等。