题目内容
假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。
注意:1.周记的开头已为你写好。
2.词数不少于60。
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.
基本分析:
1. 文体:周记。
2. 人称:I
3. 时态:一般过去时
4. 事件大意:我为爷爷奶奶准备出行+我送行
5. 图片要素:
图一:查询信息(train ticket, weather, hotel)
图二:买票(buy ticket)
图三:准备行装(package)
图四:送行(see-off)
3. 图片关联:
图一、二、三都是并列关系,主题是旅游前的准备阶段,三幅图没有轻重之分,所占篇幅比例相当。图四是最后的送别阶段,文章末尾要有点睛之笔,可以是送别感受,对爷爷奶奶的祝福,也可以是自己的成长和收获。
4. 文章立意:今年的作文和90后的学生特点相联系,积极引导高中学生要培养独立性,增加实践能力,并要照顾体谅长辈。所以文章末尾的立意也可以往这方面考虑。
参与范文(官方):
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.